All Comments on 'Flower of Beauty'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
First try?

Very clever and enticing with a twist. I am surprised it is your first entry.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
good

very good nice twist at end well thought out

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
very well constructed

A virtually flawless miniature of a story: it contains everything that needs to be said to flesh out the idea, and moves at just the right pace.

AnomolousCowherdAnomolousCowherdabout 17 years ago
Liked it in spite of itself

Normally I don't particularly like snuff stories (and this is essentially one). But this one was short enough and light enough that it worked.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Extraordinaire plot!

Amazingly creative and refreshing. Very unusual non-human story. Though the story read more like a national geography documentary and gave me no hard-on, nonetheless I like it very much.

Thanks!

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionabout 17 years ago
interesting and off beat

a very different type of story- very inventive!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Haha

Okay, but kind of dark, right? Who wants to be deceptively turned into a flower! What about if he stays a human being, as opposed to being transformed into a plant!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice twist

Nice twist on the theme of human/plant sex. Hope to read part 2 maybe??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Quite good

I would have appreciated a happier and more credible ending... the hollow flower, maybe, but why and how is the male transformed? It s OK if he can never leave again because he gets addicted to plant sex, but why always this ploy for world domination from the plants?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Another

You should make another, but about a female finding the "male" version if the plant.

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