by purplecf
Very clever and enticing with a twist. I am surprised it is your first entry.
A virtually flawless miniature of a story: it contains everything that needs to be said to flesh out the idea, and moves at just the right pace.
Normally I don't particularly like snuff stories (and this is essentially one). But this one was short enough and light enough that it worked.
Amazingly creative and refreshing. Very unusual non-human story. Though the story read more like a national geography documentary and gave me no hard-on, nonetheless I like it very much.
Thanks!
a very different type of story- very inventive!
Okay, but kind of dark, right? Who wants to be deceptively turned into a flower! What about if he stays a human being, as opposed to being transformed into a plant!
Nice twist on the theme of human/plant sex. Hope to read part 2 maybe??
I would have appreciated a happier and more credible ending... the hollow flower, maybe, but why and how is the male transformed? It s OK if he can never leave again because he gets addicted to plant sex, but why always this ploy for world domination from the plants?
You should make another, but about a female finding the "male" version if the plant.