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by LasciviousSanity

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A dark little prose piece; suicide always comes off as so depressing. Watch those typos ~ stiffened (missing an 'e')& reverberate (missing an 'r').

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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Hi. I'm M but I go by many names. LasciviousSanity around these parts. The only thing useful to know about me is that I love to write. At home, school, in the bathroom, or in a bar. Near or far. Up or down, I write all over town.