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by Amyfriend02/28/07

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quite a story that was filled with striking images but doused with sadness. I enjoyed the read, but pray tell, does it depict anyone 'famous' or special?

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by LeBroz02/28/07

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A poignant feel to this. It seems a bit long for a prose poem but too short for a short story. The sort of story that need be read more than once to better feel it.

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