All Comments on 'Musiqarium In A Fading Memory'

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Sounds like a sad prose look at a lost love. I noticed this happen a couple times, like this part from the last strophe, "the books unfinished." Should really be book's (a contraction for book is). Depending on the context, book's could also be a possessive. The way you've it, it is a plural.

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