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Great Story
I really enjoyed the story.
Just one tiny correction - shouldn't it be "maternity" raher than "maturity"?
Great Story - Excellent Example of Mature Theme!
I loved your story line! It was well-told. I would suggest maybe an editor to help with some minor spelling/grammar corrections and word choices that could be improved, but your writing style and details of the overall story are terrific! I really like how you developed the story through the erotic scene! Hope you'll keep writing!
Sexy beast
To Great story comment - Annonymous USA - why should it be maternity - she is 60 yrs old - Maturity is definitely the word - as a BBW mature lady myself - I am still experiencing lots of TLC from younger men MMMMMMMM
Sexy beast
To Great story comment - Annonymous USA - why should it be maternity - she is 60 yrs old - Maturity is definitely the word - as a BBW mature lady myself - I am still experiencing lots of TLC from younger men MMMMMMMM
Good story
You do a nice job on the set up, but you would do better to string it along some more. All of the subsequent fucking would make a nice chapter 2 or 3.
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