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Carnal Connection Pt. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/07/07

to wonderfl for words

This is one of the best I've read on Literotica...Pump it up. Maybe drop the orgy, sharing with grierson and maybe abe and jess but the others. I don't think mae and jenny and jeremy or sly are worth the ink .
good luck and keep writing..

Davideismyname@yahoo.com

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by Anonymous03/04/08

Great Story

Great Story. The sex left a little to much to the imaginaton, but the story, plot, and characters made up for that, easily. Thanks.
- Ron -

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by WoodButcher5712/03/08

I agree with Texas

you could of left off the swapping crap, otherwise I really enjoy your story.

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