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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve03/01/07

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Good, solid poem, Fool. I'm partial to these lines:
"although no one was watching
when her modesty slipped,
all noticed
flaunted serenity"

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by RedHairedandFriendly03/01/07

*grins*

I love your work. You know this. ~ Red. :)

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by RhymeFairy03/07/07

This feels,

almost sad. Love the flow and as always, your wording is exceptional, you dooo know how to paint!!!

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by 06/18/09

Nice!

This is an excellent example of how carefully selected words build an intriguing scene. Nicely done!

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