All Comments on 'flaunt'

Good, solid poem, Fool. I'm partial to these lines:

"although no one was watching

when her modesty slipped,

all noticed

flaunted serenity"

I love your work. You know this. ~ Red. :)

almost sad. Love the flow and as always, your wording is exceptional, you dooo know how to paint!!!

This is an excellent example of how carefully selected words build an intriguing scene. Nicely done!