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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Welcome aboard

I have to admit as a past pilot this story intrigued me. Most passengers have no idea how much this happens. So when your pilot greets you smile back at him or her. You might end up at an unplanned desitation!

curiositykittencuriositykittenabout 17 years ago
Nice Layover!

Story was great! Didn't quite get how they met in the bar, but understand that was part of the mystery. Exciting turn of events - and very fortunate for both characters! HOT! Please keep writing!

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Author of stories that touch the reader with emotion and a hint of reality.