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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
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What a hot and sexy swinging party you hold... Neat poem.

FifthFlowerFifthFlowerabout 17 years ago
Nice use of a single rhyme word

Erotic. Some of the meter was off. I liked the way the same rhyme sound occurred at the end of each line.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Perfect

I'm no literary critic so I will not judge the poetry but this is a perfect depiction of the joys of the swinging lifestyle. But why has'nt this couple posted more for our enjoyment?

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