All Comments on 'Jo-Anne'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Just special.

Pregnent woman has sex with husbands best friend while he is gone.Man,that is so hot.Every man wishes he had a slut wife and a slime ball buddy. Feel sorry for the kid on its way. Wonder who the daddy is. As a husband and father this is just not my fantsey, at all!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
incredibly hot

great story and beautifully written... there is nothing like lactation, the feeling of a man's teeth around my nipple, pulling, sucking. Very nice.

EvertideEvertideabout 17 years ago
Nothing new

Neglected pregnant wife is fucked by husband's best friend while he's out of town. The sheer typicality is just amazing. I gave it a 25 in the rating because at least you made an effort to not murder the English language.

venuzianvenuzianover 16 years ago
Soooooo Nasty!

That was so sensual, and your writing flawless. I loved your use of language. I've added a word or two to my vocabulary- thanks. I normally have a problem with pregnant women in particular fucking men other than their husbands. I could definitely see why this would not be a husband's fantasy. I think the reason this story didn't offend me was because there was at least a solid relationship between the two people involved; that usually works for me. There is an equally well written story on this site about an angry, neglected pregnant woman who gets a total stranger to fuck her, and fuck her very well he did; but it wasn't nearly as sensual as this. I liked at least the hint of connection, warmth and trust. ..Vee

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
sexy

Great story. Not the fact that she had been neglected by her husband, but that she was very sexy and arousing as her pregnancy came to full term. Would have loved to be hr lover in this story.

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