homeErotic PoetryFuckingPublic Comments

All Comments  for

Fucking

bywinktwice©
All
Comments (2)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Amyfriend03/03/07

Pretty cool...

tell him, let him, do what you want. Men love to be goaded on during sex. Welcome to Literotica. Just an observation on the line that reads. "But your other lovers." Maybe the word "But" would read better if it was changed to "That"

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by BOSTONFICTIONWRITER03/09/07

Meaty and gritty

I can hear her saying that to me as I am fucking her. It is a meaty and gritty poem without being obscene. I like it.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Fucking  or
More submissions by winktwice.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel