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byMichelinB©
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by Anonymous

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by JustinNickThyme03/07/07

Well written erotica

Outstanding story. Great mix of dialog and action. Keep it up...as it will me!

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by ebon_cock03/07/07

very erotic

I also loved the dialogue. There's nothing sexier than a woman asking to be fucked deep and hard. And I liked the way you described your relationship with your partner.

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by Anonymous03/11/07

Hot, hot, hot!

Excellent dialogue, great theme, can't wait for the next sexy tale! Keep up the good work, Baby!

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by frenchdame9206/08/09

nicely done!

even though i have not contributed any stories to this site, i do make a point of reviewing many of the stories that i read. you have written some really excellent stuff here. i don't have any real suggestions, and that is a first. my hat is off to you - please keep writing!

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by Anonymous03/05/12

Wow.

That was so hot. Thank you! Why aren't there more stories about loving, respectful, hard, forceful, non-lifestyle D/s relationships?

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by Anonymous06/15/12

Finally!!

I agree w the person who commented b4 me... that was awesome! I wish there were more stories like this one! :)

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