light hearted reading, I didnt mind it all. Nice twist at the end.
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Anonymous09/12/11
Should have
You should have had her do a DP that would be what I would charge.
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Anonymous12/28/11
I would have to say...
I would have to say well written. The beginning has a nice hook and as always your body is well formed and perfectly conditioned with sexy scenes that pull the mind into the situation like watching a movie. I must disagree with whoever wrote that you should have put a double penetration scene in. You've written many stories that include many different sexual situations, and it would be difficult for me to suspend my disbelief if every story you wrote had one particular sexual act over and over again, especially one with which most women are not comfortable with.
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Anonymous07/10/13
Ass fuck
What's with no ass fuck, y'all? I want to see this little lady air tight! Great story.
English
Fun romp !
and a funny ending ! Nicely done.
what's up?
Well written, fun story though the dialect & vocabulary seemed a bit at odds with eachother.
Fun for all!
Nicely written story,enjoyable.Will be reading more of your work,Steve
a fun quick read
light hearted reading, I didnt mind it all. Nice twist at the end.
Should have
You should have had her do a DP that would be what I would charge.
I would have to say...
I would have to say well written. The beginning has a nice hook and as always your body is well formed and perfectly conditioned with sexy scenes that pull the mind into the situation like watching a movie. I must disagree with whoever wrote that you should have put a double penetration scene in. You've written many stories that include many different sexual situations, and it would be difficult for me to suspend my disbelief if every story you wrote had one particular sexual act over and over again, especially one with which most women are not comfortable with.
Ass fuck
What's with no ass fuck, y'all? I want to see this little lady air tight! Great story.
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