All Comments on 'Tight Squeeze'

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floaturboatfloaturboatabout 16 years ago
After a story like this

it's so hard to find adequate words to describe how well written and hot your story is.(pun not intended). Please write more chapters or other stories. You are now one of my favorite new voices on lit.

thank you,

floaturboat

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Must have been a slow elevator for

so much to take place in that short space--P.S.--Their words would have been heard thru the whole car regardless of how quietly spoken

toJohnny7toJohnny7about 16 years ago
Wow!

True erotica. Very nice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
AWESOME

This was one of the most erotic stories I have ever read. I felt as though I was Kevin and you were my Mom. You painted an awesome picture.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
One hot momma

Do you need another son. I would like to volunteer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
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Very nicely written, all of your stories. I think I have spotted some favorites of yours though. Seems that you enjoy riding cowgirl style, not a bad thing. But other positions would be just as much, if not more fun.lol Character personallity build up is good, physical descriptions might be nice over time. Some dialog during the sex act would add to the stories, and give some insight to just how nasty you are.lol I'd like to see your stories somewhat longer, give me time to jack off and shoot my load along with you and your sex partner of choice. A hint of which stories are fond memories and which are pure fantasy would be nice also. Thank you for a lovely masturbation time. Richard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Hmmmmm!.

I read this story it was so well written that I checked out your Bio and read the other two. Very good.

cookie404cookie404about 16 years ago
I wanted it to be a taller building !!!!!

Hi !!!! Well done. You built the suspense (sexual) nicely. I probably could have stood the climax for a few more floors. I think he probably went down with her too !!!! Keep on writing !!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
That was exciting!

I liked how mom described how she got on top.... THANKS!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great!

Please write more and include moms sexy shapewear lingerie or girdles.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
All I can say

Is if you havnt done it,you certainly would love to? Very erotic and also very passionate.

JIMBO4231JIMBO4231about 16 years ago
Lovely

You naughty mom you

AhabscribeAhabscribeabout 16 years ago
Splendid erotica!

I cannot remember when I enjoyed a story more - nor felt that I was not reading fiction, but was actually inside a real event. That's the mark of a real writer, one who dazzles you with talent and leaves you wondering whether you just witnessed the real thing! Looking forward to more from you!

knickerlessalwaysknickerlessalwaysalmost 16 years ago
You must be my favourite author from now on

Wow! I wet my knickers twice whilst reading this story. How well you write!

If you ever want to have sex with a daughter instead of a son, can I please be your daughter? (Difficult, I know, especially as we are of a similar age, I think!) But still - we could pretend!

scribbleskillzscribbleskillzover 15 years ago
thuroughly enjoyed it!

Not much to say which hasn't been stated. Very exciting, engrossing, and erotic! thank you for writing it!

garyr19680garyr19680over 14 years ago
Loved it

I really felt like I was there.

GDesmondGDesmondover 14 years ago
Always a pleasure

Delicious! Just simply delicious!

txcoatl1970txcoatl1970over 13 years ago
I'd love for your mom to be pregnant by her son

It's a fetish of mine on top of the incest, mothers and sons making love and babies as well. Sure, at forty-three, your chances of doing so "naturally" aren't great, but hey, that's what makes it so spicy for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very nice

I loved the way the story built and like someone else, would have loved to see it be a taller building or a longer ride in some way.

spundrryn62793spundrryn62793over 13 years ago
Full Breasted

Next time how bout giving old mom some "38DD's!That would keep the son busy for a while and give the reader some thing to think about.I love

big boobs any way.My kind of story.Please dont let them die.Please keep them going.I loved the whole story.

randiroduprandirodupabout 13 years ago
Nature Endowed Carnal Desires of moms & sons

Very imaginative portrayal of opportunistic circumstance for the initiation of mother-son introduction to the magnificence of incestual carnal joy.

My male member was as aroused as my desires were with the images of incestual lust which you created. Please keep IT up !

Hugs, Randy.

rightbankrightbankabout 10 years ago
I hate it when authors don't proof read

I was 38 when I got divorced. After my 40-something husband chose to try life with his 20-something secretary, we sold our house and I moved, with our son Kevin, into a nice apartment. Kevin was 18 at the time.

I was 43, and Kevin was 19, when something happened that changed our lives forever.

So, in five years, while mom goes from 38 to 43, Kevin ages one year, from 18 to 19?

earlbrowderearlbrowderover 9 years ago
pushing my buttons

Great elevator scene!

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114uabout 5 years ago
Love All

your stories lady! Incest is by far the naughtiest and most arousing genre of all time and I've been a fan of yours ever since I've had the pleasure of reading "My Badly Kept Secret.

That was an epic story & you are an Amazing author!! Thank you so much for instigating some of the most intense orgasms I've had throughout my life,lol

ROCKY70ROCKY70almost 5 years ago
OK !!!!! GOOD STORY

Mother and Son get warmed up in a packed elevator, and look out when the doors open.........THANKS NICE READ

ortsmaortsmaover 4 years ago
I wish...

I wish you were MY mommy. ;)

zenecazenecaalmost 4 years ago
to short

great story just not long enough

satyr54satyr54over 3 years ago
Great Story!

I loved it, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your hot stories!

Fl_maledadFl_maledadabout 3 years ago
Great quick and sexy

I love a story that is from the woman’s point of view! The way you tell the story is very very sexy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I wanted to enjoy it, but your terrible math distracted me, and I couldn't. He's 18 and she's 38. Then a year later he's 19, and she's 43.

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I'm divorced, "mildly bi", 51, a journalist in semi-retirement. My stories are closer to erotica than to porn, and may not be raunchy enough to satisfy the prurient tastes of some readers. Current favorite quote: "Moral indignation is jealousy with a halo." (H.G.Wells)