by gentlemom
it's so hard to find adequate words to describe how well written and hot your story is.(pun not intended). Please write more chapters or other stories. You are now one of my favorite new voices on lit.
thank you,
floaturboat
so much to take place in that short space--P.S.--Their words would have been heard thru the whole car regardless of how quietly spoken
This was one of the most erotic stories I have ever read. I felt as though I was Kevin and you were my Mom. You painted an awesome picture.
Very nicely written, all of your stories. I think I have spotted some favorites of yours though. Seems that you enjoy riding cowgirl style, not a bad thing. But other positions would be just as much, if not more fun.lol Character personallity build up is good, physical descriptions might be nice over time. Some dialog during the sex act would add to the stories, and give some insight to just how nasty you are.lol I'd like to see your stories somewhat longer, give me time to jack off and shoot my load along with you and your sex partner of choice. A hint of which stories are fond memories and which are pure fantasy would be nice also. Thank you for a lovely masturbation time. Richard
I read this story it was so well written that I checked out your Bio and read the other two. Very good.
Hi !!!! Well done. You built the suspense (sexual) nicely. I probably could have stood the climax for a few more floors. I think he probably went down with her too !!!! Keep on writing !!!!!
I liked how mom described how she got on top.... THANKS!
Please write more and include moms sexy shapewear lingerie or girdles.
Is if you havnt done it,you certainly would love to? Very erotic and also very passionate.
I cannot remember when I enjoyed a story more - nor felt that I was not reading fiction, but was actually inside a real event. That's the mark of a real writer, one who dazzles you with talent and leaves you wondering whether you just witnessed the real thing! Looking forward to more from you!
Wow! I wet my knickers twice whilst reading this story. How well you write!
If you ever want to have sex with a daughter instead of a son, can I please be your daughter? (Difficult, I know, especially as we are of a similar age, I think!) But still - we could pretend!
Not much to say which hasn't been stated. Very exciting, engrossing, and erotic! thank you for writing it!
It's a fetish of mine on top of the incest, mothers and sons making love and babies as well. Sure, at forty-three, your chances of doing so "naturally" aren't great, but hey, that's what makes it so spicy for me.
I loved the way the story built and like someone else, would have loved to see it be a taller building or a longer ride in some way.
Next time how bout giving old mom some "38DD's!That would keep the son busy for a while and give the reader some thing to think about.I love
big boobs any way.My kind of story.Please dont let them die.Please keep them going.I loved the whole story.
Very imaginative portrayal of opportunistic circumstance for the initiation of mother-son introduction to the magnificence of incestual carnal joy.
My male member was as aroused as my desires were with the images of incestual lust which you created. Please keep IT up !
Hugs, Randy.
I was 38 when I got divorced. After my 40-something husband chose to try life with his 20-something secretary, we sold our house and I moved, with our son Kevin, into a nice apartment. Kevin was 18 at the time.
I was 43, and Kevin was 19, when something happened that changed our lives forever.
So, in five years, while mom goes from 38 to 43, Kevin ages one year, from 18 to 19?
your stories lady! Incest is by far the naughtiest and most arousing genre of all time and I've been a fan of yours ever since I've had the pleasure of reading "My Badly Kept Secret.
That was an epic story & you are an Amazing author!! Thank you so much for instigating some of the most intense orgasms I've had throughout my life,lol
Mother and Son get warmed up in a packed elevator, and look out when the doors open.........THANKS NICE READ
I loved it, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your hot stories!
I love a story that is from the woman’s point of view! The way you tell the story is very very sexy!
I wanted to enjoy it, but your terrible math distracted me, and I couldn't. He's 18 and she's 38. Then a year later he's 19, and she's 43.