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Love it!
I love it, love it, love it. You really have a gift here. Thanks!
sorry - didn't like it
didn't like it and here's why. reinforces the stereotype of the predatory gay male - big time. okay, that's a PC thing so take it as you will. for sure lots of things on this site are not PC and i can deal but the story has to make sense. what i really thought was shallow and ill concieved was how three generations of presumably straight men could be so easily lulled into homosexual activity. most especially when the grandson realized early on what his dad and the writer were up on all those hunting trips. so was this guy some svengali? no warning bells going off when a guy grabs your cock etc. etc.? duh? atmosphere nicely evoked but otherwise this story didn't work for me at all.
thank`s a lot?
Well done I had a tale or two to tell , but reading your story as made me stop and think can I do justice to my plot as you have done to yours ! A great tale well done again.
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