And did Texas Bob win her in a raffle? Sorry, the whole idea of Jeanette being passed around like a mindless piece of meat put me off this story right from the start.
If ghostwords was so put off at the beginning, why in hell did he waste his time reading it? The story was well enough written. I think ghostwords is an asshole for the way he rated this story. Perhaps ghostwords is really Don8769 (or whatever the fuck that guys name is.
I also didn't care for the opening comments about "inheriting" the girl ... and they aren't explained in the story. But once we got to the good stuff, man, it was GOOD stuff! Great job here. Thanks!
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Anonymous01/03/09
friendly amendment?
Instead of saying he inherited her why not just say that he'd heard from a friend she had a reputation as a prick teaser?
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You "inherited" her?
And did Texas Bob win her in a raffle? Sorry, the whole idea of Jeanette being passed around like a mindless piece of meat put me off this story right from the start.
I LIKED IT...
If ghostwords was so put off at the beginning, why in hell did he waste his time reading it? The story was well enough written. I think ghostwords is an asshole for the way he rated this story. Perhaps ghostwords is really Don8769 (or whatever the fuck that guys name is.
It's very, very hot
I also didn't care for the opening comments about "inheriting" the girl ... and they aren't explained in the story. But once we got to the good stuff, man, it was GOOD stuff! Great job here. Thanks!
friendly amendment?
Instead of saying he inherited her why not just say that he'd heard from a friend she had a reputation as a prick teaser?
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