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The Way It Is
As often as you read a writers work, you form opinions of the writer based on their ilk - their interest - the subjects that cause them to spend their time, talent and self.
This was an interesting effort displaying strong talent and on the surface of itself quite different and entertaining.
However, the portfolio it resides in is much less than that by writer choice of subjects and themes. A writer certainly has the right to do as desired but should understand that our visualization is limited to what they do in aggregate. People are largely what they do. Both here as in life where applause and fallout occur by their choice.
Like elephants, minds offended are slow if ever to forget. Saying that this story was a movement towards reality and a possible of life that wasn't abrasive or demeaning. It wasn't nice but it did have consequence - except for the weird closing of the ex-wives whorehouse which begs puzzlement as to its relationship or benefit to the story.
Why the quirk? Or perhaps the writer has no expectation of general acceptance and appreciation for her talent.
Careful on naming names
Interesting, odd story. I read it mostly because I was intrigued as to why someone would make an obscure former Blue Jays pitcher turned broadcaster, now deceased, the subject of their story.
Looks like it was just a coincidence, but the fact I "knew" the name kept me off balance, always expecting something else.
Best to google any name you "make up" to be sure it's not known for something else.
more proof this author does NOT get Hetro at all
well written but realy NOT funny and not satrical at all. It is said people with agendas causes be religious kooks or those for example pushing estrogen laced agendas....... have NO sense of humor.
Men/husbands working hard... even over time for a few weeks or months is NOT by itself even close to justification for cheating...
how can they be married and he be away 3 or 4 times a month.... 2 or 3 nights at a shot and she NOT know what he does for a living?
be reasonable? how does she marry some guy a 53 year old man a tradtional old world guy who she knows has already betrayed once and then DEMAND or expect him to change?
reasonable?
Any woman who cheats. cheats on purpose,
whatever she says caused it is just a rationization for the fact she is a totl worthless slut, a piece of trash to be thrown in the gutter. To marry for money makes one have sex for money, prostitution by any other name is still prostitution. This slut wasnt worth the time to date much less to marry.
Many ponderables here...
He seems to have the one taste in women, proven by their later lives and friendships. Was he cruel or just a big softy is another question. I think the latter since he gave each wife about a year of living well; thus giving them time to cement the foundations for life after JC. Then there was his unshakable belief in his choice of women; so much so he always sought approval for a new love from his previous wives.
The story reminded me of the times in old England when there was a custom to sell one’s wife for a shilling; once she had outlived her usefulness (?). Ouch! I feel the stinging bite of whips across my broad chauvinistic shoulders...lol.
Angiquesophie, many thanks for another fine tale
My best wishes
Imaginative
a - You're an exciting, imaginative writer. I enjoy your prose very much.
I laughed until I almost cried....
....hilarious....that will teach a cheating wife to set a double standard for hubby....though I don't get why the hell he keeps marrying those women....is this guy a different kind of Bluebeard? I give it a 5 and will mention this on the AH.
Delicious
As always your writing is tremendous. I think what I love most about it is its simplicity. It's a lesson for other writers that(including me at times)believe that more is better when writing a story.
ALL THE HANDWRITING AND PRENUPS AND WORD OF MOUTH
how dumb does a person have to be to fail that exam. TK U MLJ LV NV
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