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Nothing is ever gained by not taking a chance.
Boyd
nice!
It is, indeed, a lovely little story. Short, yes. Not particularly erotic (only relevant because of the venue). But a very nice piece of fiction, which happens to show why COMMUNICATION is important in any relationship.
Write on!
-- KVK
very nice
i read this story with myself in mind. although it didn't start out that way .. but i got her in the end. and still have her today.. 31 years later.. thank you for reminding me.
Short but sweet
Love the song and love the story. Thank you. Story and song fit hand in glove.
Loved It!
I know how you feel! I was in a similar situation but it did not turn out so well for me. Can't win 'em all I guess.
That's more like it.
My fourth reading of a story by this author and at last it is one that comes within the range of her experience. A story I can believe in told with great tenderness, and as always the writer's style is excellent, clear, simple, grammatical. Well done!
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