I just have to say, very nice stories. :D I also noticed that you're relatively local. I used to live in Toronto, lovely town. Have you heard the VNV version of 'Destillat' by Das Ich? Also a good song to work by. =D
Anyways, I just thought I'd give you some accolades for your work. If you were interested in chatting some, my e-mail is email@example.com
HOT! I can't wait to read what happens next between Zarina and her Daddy!! Will he give it to her in the ass?? Or let the elevator repairmen join in??
The slut deserves to not make it to school, her dad keeping her on the boil until the two big black repair men get their share.
Then perhaps all four of them should go back home and involve the mother who they surprise on the kitchen floor pleasuring herself with a huge black dildo
That was veryy hott.
Hope there;sz moree.
fuck yeah, the best story on this whole site. awsome job, keep it coming babe
LOVED this. make a sequel!?
Yes! Loved it.
That was good and yes maybe it started out as rape but before he had sex with her she wanted it..loved it you should write more
I love these stories!
Is it possible for you to do a sequel? If it is, please do.
.... good subject but didn't really work for me. There was nothing likeable or affectionate about the Dad character or his daughter, for the reader to cheer on the coupling. It felt like watching a soap opera with two dislikable characters fighting- sorry, it didn't turn me on.
Very intense, look forward to the continuation or more like it! It really turned me on.
i loved every part of it! i wish more stories were like this on here. i hate it when the dad is all romantic and sweet. i also love that the dad started everything. most of the other stories have the daughter seducing the dad. i love hearing about the dad just taking the daughter. amazing story, keep up the great work!
Amazing, got me all wet, loved how daddy took his slut daughter and made her his whore. I get bored with the 'daddy makes love' to his little girl, I want to read how he fucked her hard when he wanted it, if she wanted it or not. That is how I would want to be fucked by my daddy...and daddy make me beg.
I have two step daughters and I would like to fuck them. They are hot,
hot,hot. My mouth waters just thinking about them. Send some more about
the elevator or better yet about going home that evening.
this story was one of the best ive ever read! as mentioned before i would enjoy reading about them going home that night. fuck fuck fuck i loved it!
damn, i wish there were more stories like this! dominating men are such a turn on, and the situation made it even better. i give this 5 stars for making me cream my panties.
I love stories where daddies rape their daughter, but not a fan of always mentioning the daughter is 18. This was hot, I loved the way the daddy took control. I look forward to more.
I agree, I love Daddy taking control of his daughter's pussy, and I get tired of the constant age reminders. I love it even more when he takes his daughter's ass and teaches her to suck his cock. Daddy making his daughter a slut and then whoring her out to his friends and strangers is hot.
i'm gonna have to wash my sheets now, shiiiiit. (;
That was so good,,please write some more,,,,,,
Please write more!!! Made me cum so hard!!!
i thank girls dress the way they do just to see if there daddys will fuck them i know my 16 year old does. And her time is comeing real soon
fantastic hot horny story you write. daddy and the elevator
was awesome this was a very hot horny story. i would love more parts of this one .
would love to read a sequel of this story - so fuckin good. i'm all wet after readin this
I JUST WANNA READ SOME MORE LYK THIS. I GUESS IF I WAS ALSO BLESSED VTH SUCH AN SITUTATION VTH MY DAD
I wish I had a dad to fuck me like that. I wish there was some anal action as well and you should definitely make a sequel. I came so hard to this.
this shit had me cumming so hard you should defintly make a sequel !
Sooo wet mmmm
This story has me so wet. Id love to get fucked like that. Make a sequel please
Loved it, you must write more.
A story that gets to a good hard fuck within the first page - even though this was only one page - it was damn good!
Wow that was soo sexy. Pleez make a sequel!!
Hey to me this sounds like a real storie it don't sound made up ...I bet this really happened and I know she's a slut but come on man that's ur daught at least call her by her name sometimes make her feel special and tell her how beautiful she is but still fuck the hell out of her and still make her bag for the daddy dick
I would love to see this continued. As others said, I
The repair man should join daddy. Or perhaps daddy could share her hungry holes with his friends. If she's a true slut, daddy would make sure she had every hole stuffed full of meaty cock.
i have enjoyed this heaven more than 100 times cutties contact
Loved it. More please!
Dude how fucking desperate are you to leave your email and your ridiculous misspelled comment on like every story in this genre? Does that shit actually get you any responses? And what the fuck is a cuttie?
oh btw. Good story
Love this and it should be continued. I love a story I can picture and feel happening specially since I have a photographic memory. This one is sweet please continue to write and post. Awesome.
oh i wud just love to get fucked like this.. My pussy is dripping.. I masturbated reading it and came so hard.. I just want a big cock inside me..
i have given enjoyment to many sweet soft smooth young fresh tight tiny virgin little cute pussies with red head pussy lips
golden yellow clitories
honey filled pussy holes
cutties can mail firstname.lastname@example.org
hi Anonymous who is driling pusy hole i want to be your daddy cn i
Zarina? Sounds like an alien name...lol
This is so fucking hot i like incest stories
Well written but elevator sex is somewhat boring.
grate starte just lone this incest story MORE. yours leann xx
This story is so hot. I'd love to fuck my daughter like this. Very erotic! Loved it.
This is one of the best I have read. I cum like hell every time I read this . Hope you could make a sequel.
I loved it, to be honest, this is the shit I fantasize about, putting my fingers in my wet pussy
Oh god im cumming make me cum my pussy need this oh god tht elavator probaly shook with how big u made his dick i want u in me.
I wish my dad fucked me especially like that
So hot my pussy is ready and oh here it could you made me come over I am so hot and wet keep me hot
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