All Comments on 'Daddy and the Elevator'

I just have to say, very nice stories. :D I also noticed that you're relatively local. I used to live in Toronto, lovely town. Have you heard the VNV version of 'Destillat' by Das Ich? Also a good song to work by. =D

Anyways, I just thought I'd give you some accolades for your work. If you were interested in chatting some, my e-mail is resplendentorangutang@gmail.com

HOT! I can't wait to read what happens next between Zarina and her Daddy!! Will he give it to her in the ass?? Or let the elevator repairmen join in??

The slut deserves to not make it to school, her dad keeping her on the boil until the two big black repair men get their share.

Then perhaps all four of them should go back home and involve the mother who they surprise on the kitchen floor pleasuring herself with a huge black dildo

Wow!

That was veryy hott.

Hope there;sz moree.

fuck yeah, the best story on this whole site. awsome job, keep it coming babe

LOVED this. make a sequel!?

Yes! Loved it.

That was good and yes maybe it started out as rape but before he had sex with her she wanted it..loved it you should write more

I love these stories!

Is it possible for you to do a sequel? If it is, please do.

.... good subject but didn't really work for me. There was nothing likeable or affectionate about the Dad character or his daughter, for the reader to cheer on the coupling. It felt like watching a soap opera with two dislikable characters fighting- sorry, it didn't turn me on.

Very intense, look forward to the continuation or more like it! It really turned me on.

i loved every part of it! i wish more stories were like this on here. i hate it when the dad is all romantic and sweet. i also love that the dad started everything. most of the other stories have the daughter seducing the dad. i love hearing about the dad just taking the daughter. amazing story, keep up the great work!

Amazing, got me all wet, loved how daddy took his slut daughter and made her his whore. I get bored with the 'daddy makes love' to his little girl, I want to read how he fucked her hard when he wanted it, if she wanted it or not. That is how I would want to be fucked by my daddy...and daddy make me beg.

I have two step daughters and I would like to fuck them. They are hot,

hot,hot. My mouth waters just thinking about them. Send some more about

the elevator or better yet about going home that evening.

this story was one of the best ive ever read! as mentioned before i would enjoy reading about them going home that night. fuck fuck fuck i loved it!

damn, i wish there were more stories like this! dominating men are such a turn on, and the situation made it even better. i give this 5 stars for making me cream my panties.

I love stories where daddies rape their daughter, but not a fan of always mentioning the daughter is 18. This was hot, I loved the way the daddy took control. I look forward to more.

I agree, I love Daddy taking control of his daughter's pussy, and I get tired of the constant age reminders. I love it even more when he takes his daughter's ass and teaches her to suck his cock. Daddy making his daughter a slut and then whoring her out to his friends and strangers is hot.

i'm gonna have to wash my sheets now, shiiiiit. (;

That was so good,,please write some more,,,,,,

Please write more!!! Made me cum so hard!!!

i thank girls dress the way they do just to see if there daddys will fuck them i know my 16 year old does. And her time is comeing real soon

fantastic hot horny story you write. daddy and the elevator

was awesome this was a very hot horny story. i would love more parts of this one .

would love to read a sequel of this story - so fuckin good. i'm all wet after readin this

I JUST WANNA READ SOME MORE LYK THIS. I GUESS IF I WAS ALSO BLESSED VTH SUCH AN SITUTATION VTH MY DAD

I wish I had a dad to fuck me like that. I wish there was some anal action as well and you should definitely make a sequel. I came so hard to this.

this shit had me cumming so hard you should defintly make a sequel !

Sooo wet mmmm

This story has me so wet. Id love to get fucked like that. Make a sequel please

Loved it, you must write more.

A story that gets to a good hard fuck within the first page - even though this was only one page - it was damn good!

Wow that was soo sexy. Pleez make a sequel!!

Hey to me this sounds like a real storie it don't sound made up ...I bet this really happened and I know she's a slut but come on man that's ur daught at least call her by her name sometimes make her feel special and tell her how beautiful she is but still fuck the hell out of her and still make her bag for the daddy dick

I would love to see this continued. As others said, I

The repair man should join daddy. Or perhaps daddy could share her hungry holes with his friends. If she's a true slut, daddy would make sure she had every hole stuffed full of meaty cock.

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Loved it. More please!

Dude how fucking desperate are you to leave your email and your ridiculous misspelled comment on like every story in this genre? Does that shit actually get you any responses? And what the fuck is a cuttie?

oh btw. Good story

Love this and it should be continued. I love a story I can picture and feel happening specially since I have a photographic memory. This one is sweet please continue to write and post. Awesome.

oh i wud just love to get fucked like this.. My pussy is dripping.. I masturbated reading it and came so hard.. I just want a big cock inside me..

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Zarina? Sounds like an alien name...lol

This is so fucking hot i like incest stories

Well written but elevator sex is somewhat boring.

grate starte just lone this incest story MORE. yours leann xx

This story is so hot. I'd love to fuck my daughter like this. Very erotic! Loved it.

This is one of the best I have read. I cum like hell every time I read this . Hope you could make a sequel.

I loved it, to be honest, this is the shit I fantasize about, putting my fingers in my wet pussy

Oh god im cumming make me cum my pussy need this oh god tht elavator probaly shook with how big u made his dick i want u in me.

I wish my dad fucked me especially like that

So hot my pussy is ready and oh here it could you made me come over I am so hot and wet keep me hot

She needs an incest baby planted in her belly.

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Omg, I have never been this horny in my fucking life! I need a monster cock in me! Y can't there be a fucking horny rabbit-like monster membered father in my room! Mmm...

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This is the best story I've read on here yet. This made me so unbearably wet please write a sequel, possibly with ass fucking?

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Somebody's been watching too much porn! The characters bear little resemblance to a real father or daughter. Consistent with the lack of reality, there is a definite Dom/Sub element to this piece, which isn't bad but might not appeal to many. There is forceful, then there is hateful. Unfortunately, this story crosses that line. Picture the daughter as a hooker and the father as the dirty cop who busts her. Same storyline ensues with precious few word changes. Consequently, the characters are little more than role players who have hot, if uncaring, sex.

No love, aggravated, forced sex on a daughter. I'm not against love stories, no matter the relation of the people involved but, this is pure trash from a warped mind.

this makes me wanna fuck my dad agein

Really hot. I almost came everywhere. You should write things like this a lot more. I love it was great.

i got came everywere o.o if u make a prt two ill surly read it !!!!!!!!! now i need to jack off cuz my dck is harder then a rock best story ever 10/10

He should fuck her pregnant! Breed a new toy in her womb.

This is abuse...people who liked this are fucking crazy!!!😡

This story made me so wet and horny. I came twice. I loved how daddy made his little girl choke on his dick. I love daddy/daughter non-consent stories.

awesome story with a slut like daughter

Amazing there needs to be a part 2 please make a part 2

I love father/daughter sexual relationship gentle and loving. Fathers loving their daughters and daughters loving their dads and of cause lots of orgasms through penetration, cunnilingus and getting that dick really sucked

part 2 please

Please oh please make a part 2 there definetly needs to be a part 2

there's still no sequel . . . we're not getting sequel so everybody

face facts - even though this story truly1ofthe absolute best this site

ever got IT'S NEVER GONNA HAPPEN . . . let's pretend that this

the movies - SOMEBODY REMAKE DAMN STORY MAKE IT

EVEN BETTER ALONG WITH GIVE US SOME DAMN

SEQUELS THAT WE'LL CHERISH

Absolutely no details. What father is going to flip like that? There's very little description on the sex. I love a good father/daughter story. This isn't one.

So fucking hot. Thanks

I came before the end

Please write part 2.

So hot! My pussy is soaked!

No details, flipped out over nothing. Also when you make the daughter such a slut it completely dilutes the sex between father and daughter. Especially the other 'mature men'. No. It devalues the sex, and didn't turn me on for even 1 second.

It'd take a pretty weak or, warped mind to write or, even get off on a story about a father raping his daughter while trapped in an elevator. Jeez man, you're totally fucked up in the head.

I did not like it. A story where there was tenderness between the father and daughter that slowly built up would have been better. It would take 2 or mire pages to do it justice. And i feel yicky saying that. But, this story was animalistic. Twisted. No redeeming qualities.

thanks

Ahhhh, fantastic!

It turned me on so much now im just wet waiting to be fucked

Whoa that was hit. I wish I were longer

Love the story and the other comment was right not enough. However, would love another chapter and what happens to Zarina gets home from school and how her Father will handle her and if the Mother will be involved.

I liked the story and especially liked the way that her father taught her a lesson on how to take care of a older man.

I've seen enough high school age girls in the mall and see how they are dressed.

They all look like sluts by the way that they wear shorts or jeans and they are so tight that you can almost see their slits when they are walking

Even on a rare occasion when I see them wearing skirts the skirts are so short that it doesn't leave much for the imagination

My hope is for zarinas daddy to educate her in getting fucked in the ass while they are waiting in the elevator

I think that would be a great story line for the next chapter

VERY NICE! FUCKED MY TEEN NEIGHBOR LIKE THAT YESTERDAY IN MY BATHROOM WHILE MY WIFE WAS OUT.

Not to my taste

A little mundane and could have been thought through quite a bit more. As it is, it's just another short fuck story.

Or should I say "elevated" fast? Each to his or her own, but I think that even if I was into forced/dom stuff this could have been done a lot better.

Daddy fucked me hard,lost my virginity

Ohhhhh I just came fucking hard after reading this.. I wish I had a dominant daddy just like this.. btw I loved it when I fucked myself in front of my math teacher in detention.. Got him to fuck me like nothing bitches..

was caught in elevator between floors, mme and a elderly grandma and young grand daughter gma had great big tits an a low cut top, my dick was getting hard just looking at them, she seen me looking asked if i was enjoying the view the grand daughter answered for me with a yes he is gma its shows

When you have some time have someone introduce you to a dictionary and maybe the proper use of an apostrophe. It's really distracting to be reading and all of a sudden something jumps out that a sixth grader should know.. I don't know about other people, but that kind of error ruins the read for me.....

Rape is wrong no matter who is doing it. Put this shit in the garbage.

This is exactly how it should be. Daddy taking what he wants. Using his daughter as the whore he raised her to be. Would have been nice to also involve her mum. A hot threesome. Mum lets daddy have his whore daughter as long as she gets to instruct, watch and participate when she wants to. Perfect family unit.

so hot. where can i get one lol

Shaved clit? Lmao what

This story is so sexy.i can read it over and over and still make me cum everytime.thanks for making it I love it.you should make another one.

I like father daughter sex but not rape