All Comments on 'Rage Against Your Romance'

I like your voice. Your poetry is powerful and tells it the way it is.

Okay, now you need to calm down. Relax. Take a breath (lol).

and I hope they come soon. This poem held an aura of simplicity, but delved deeper on a second read. My only critique, "I never wanted your soft touches

this was fucking straight and twisted", was the 'was' intentional? It chops the flow. Other than that, fantastic. Kudos.