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by vampiredust03/11/07

Excellent

brevity and conciseness of imagery. Me likes.

Mentioned in today's new poem reviews.

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by MyNecroticSnail03/11/07

bahaa haa

me likee too.
Most people murder haiku, but this is murderous - haiku.

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by KOLKORE03/11/07

I can smell blood …

Several dramatic reads mutually exclusive; all legitimate. Combined, It would take some work, to decipher this Haiku as a whole. And with strategically situated red roses and blood no reader could avoid the temptation to figure it out for too long…

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