All Comments on 'Sunbathing'

and very unbelievable. Lousy buildup and a poor reading story.

--you assume that it has to get better------Unfortunately it never did.

Because like the mountain it's there. What a waste of time. Writer, you have some potential but the sex in this story started faster than a porn flick and the characters were about as one dimensional. Next time slow it down and introduce the people in the story to us.

I loved your story, I just hope in the future that you write them longer, maybe a page or two. But all the same i enjoyed that.