One hour down, eleven to go...
Good start - and you've got plenty of places to go. Well written, well paced, good handle on the language. Thank you!
This is a really nice start, nothing very hard as yet but My Lady is sure having a good time. I'm agog to know how far she'll compel him go.
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One hour down, eleven to go...
Excellent, excellent!
Good start - and you've got plenty of places to go. Well written, well paced, good handle on the language. Thank you!
Very arousing
This is a really nice start, nothing very hard as yet but My Lady is sure having a good time. I'm agog to know how far she'll compel him go.
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Back to Male Slave For Rent Ch. 01 or
More submissions by shambles.