by Luckie_Duckie
"I shivered again and rested my head on my knees. Maybe I would luck out and get hypothermia and die in my sleep. I smiled a genuine smile. Yeah, that wouldn't be too bad. I mean, I was already colder than I had ever been in my life. Hypothermia wouldn't be to far off. Of course I could get phenomena and die slowly too. I didn't like that idea, obviously."
She could die of 'phenomena'? Did you mean pneumonia, the lung infection? Also, in the sentence before that one, it should be "Hypothermia wouldn't be too far off."