All Comments on 'Smooth as Silk Ch. 01'

very good story,

Very nicely done. Well written. Paints a beautiful picture in my mind. And my brain has taken off, hoping/thinking where this story will take me. Nice, steamy HOT!

LOVE THIS STORY. SMOOTH AS SILK CH1.

AND ITS ABOUT TO HOT UP.

A great story. It nicely situates sexual fantasy and playfulness within a loving relationship. I love how you build the narrator's arousal to a peak, going from purring kitty to hungry lioness, with lines like this:

"and then you leaned over and licked my hot cunt, right there where it was gaping open from the vibrator. You swirled your tongue around that opening, licking inside me, moving to the outer edges, tasting those juices..."