All Comments on 'Sara'

Can't wait for the next part of the story - Please let there be another part.

I enjoyed the instantaneous hotter-than-hot event. Carry it on to the next chapter.

The flow of passion was just right, and the 'coming back down to earth' as well. Chapter 2 could be just as good!

Roger B

Waiting for chapter 2 !!!!!!!!!

Chapter two is in order here. Perhaps they can continue with her wanting to get pregnant?

When you write, try not to assume that all of your readers are horny teenagers. I gave up on this story after the amateurish opening paragraphs of your story.

the Ct. Yankee

not for a first submission at least. just try to add more of a plot next time, you definitely have potential.

What is it with some people? Why on earth does someone always suggest that the story would be furthered by the woman getting pregnant? What is erotic about two lustful strangers enjoying pure uncomplicated sex ending up with a child no-one wants?

Great stroke story, thanks.

Great job! I loved it, very vivid and exciting!