continue this story..... would love to read what happens next with these two. Very hot read!!!!!
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Anonymous03/20/07
Wow nice work
For a 1st timer that was quite interesting
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Anonymous03/21/07
I need more.....
Great work, please continue this story. I look forward to reading more.
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Anonymous03/24/07
more...
...please!
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Anonymous03/26/07
Good start
Thanks for this articulate, arousing story. The hot student comes across well. Just make sure to separate the two voices clearly to avoid confusion. Look forward to the next parts!
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Anonymous02/01/13
I loved this !
What a wonderful ending. As usual with an unfamiliar author I checked your profile and saw the brief info about Chapter 2 etc. to find that he must have become aware quickly that she had been around. So when I got to reading this Ch.1 I loved the way that it ended. Loved it! I am about the read Ch 2 and subsequent chapters. Encore!
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continue this story..... would love to read what happens next with these two. Very hot read!!!!!
Wow nice work
For a 1st timer that was quite interesting
I need more.....
Great work, please continue this story. I look forward to reading more.
more...
...please!
Good start
Thanks for this articulate, arousing story. The hot student comes across well. Just make sure to separate the two voices clearly to avoid confusion. Look forward to the next parts!
I loved this !
What a wonderful ending. As usual with an unfamiliar author I checked your profile and saw the brief info about Chapter 2 etc. to find that he must have become aware quickly that she had been around. So when I got to reading this Ch.1 I loved the way that it ended. Loved it! I am about the read Ch 2 and subsequent chapters. Encore!
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