All Comments on 'I Don't Believe You'

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Don1028Don1028about 17 years ago
Loved it---Really seemed real

I could picture it happening-

THANKS

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
It Did Seem Real!

Good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Superb sexual tension

Well done, thoroughly enjoyed the story.

Wizarddriver

hammer17hammer17about 17 years ago
Hmmmmmmmm good one!!

Very good story, it's hot, sexy and kinda romantic. How about more of this one?? Thanks

Paul

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
ummm...

the second your character stated that girl on girl sex "wasn't normal," i stopped reading. i'm sorry, but that's just silly. this story, right from the beginning, seems to adhere to heteronormative values, which is not what this particular section of the site is about.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

"heteronormative values" really? Think of all the female celebrities that claim to be bisexual or fluid and eventually end up in a hetero relationship. This is not a claim arguing that Lesbians are not real - The intention is to expose the women who act lesbian for the attention or because it's in fashion. Many women gave up a lot to be able to express themselves without hiding. Women who seek other women because it's "safe" or because it's "fun" do a disservice to lesbians. This story possibly without trying exposes the motivation of girls experimenting. Unless, the view is that a straight girl experimenting is a "victory" then none of this matters.

Sorry for the rant.

Anonymous
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