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I love the poem. I'm sure you want more details than that. Like why do I love it. It would be nice if I offered more details.
ahhh
To reminisce. OF air and childhood, and what better place than in a forest?
I enoyed the bit of tranquility that you pose in this poem. I like your work, snail, always have.
g-g
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Concedes with WickedEve’s feedback. Thank you for your work.
a soft side
of your nature resonates with colors of the wind...nice read...blue
Not crazy
about " fecund"...but that last line is perfect.
Nice work
fecund is ok with me
"fecund dream of childhood" is an intellectually productive dream of childhood. Seems reasonable. The leaving as hollow as one enters after the sun comes up (shadows narrow) makes me wonder how fecund the dream was.
fecund
is a horrible word, one of the worst in the English language IMO, that is why I used it. It sounds opposite what it means. If I am correct this can be read a variety of ways i.e. hollow can refer to either glen or I. There are no trees in the forest, doesn't look like any higher animals either. It is not what it seems, like so much else here. By the time you hit the "love" it should drip with acid. It can refer to the misuse of the english language. There are always hidden messages, agendas. A cost for "LOVED IT".
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