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Preparing for My Lover

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by Anonymous

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by activelysexual03/21/07

Carried along by your story

You really pulled me in as a reader, with a mix of detail on the physical and mental preparations as she enjoyed them, quite believeable. Loved it.

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by Anonymous05/29/07

beautiful melodic flow

Excellent flow to your words, they bring all the senses into play.

I found your name in the volunteer editor listing. I am not a literotica member ... I have written several novels (5) and while nothing like your style of writing, I would like your opinion about mine. Would you be interested? I can send a couple of chapters from one. I write in MS Word. They are all action/adventure/romance with an erotic core to some of the plot lines.
Regards,
Rob rcarver1@cfl.rr.com

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by Edward Teach05/31/08

Teriffic

Very descriptive. This could easily have been catagorized a "How To." I made some mental notes.

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