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Carried along by your story
You really pulled me in as a reader, with a mix of detail on the physical and mental preparations as she enjoyed them, quite believeable. Loved it.
beautiful melodic flow
Excellent flow to your words, they bring all the senses into play.
I found your name in the volunteer editor listing. I am not a literotica member ... I have written several novels (5) and while nothing like your style of writing, I would like your opinion about mine. Would you be interested? I can send a couple of chapters from one. I write in MS Word. They are all action/adventure/romance with an erotic core to some of the plot lines.
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Rob rcarver1@cfl.rr.com
Teriffic
Very descriptive. This could easily have been catagorized a "How To." I made some mental notes.
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