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WTF?
Perhaps one of the most pathetic stories I have ever encountered.
WTF?
I agree.
I thought it was really very good
Ignore the hateful review. I thought your story was really great. I'm a huge fan of and really enjoy bi/gay incest stories. There are way too few of them. I've enjoyed being with large folks of both sex's. I am not into large just for the sake of large. For me having sex with a large person can be a big turn on in certain situations. I like all types and enjoy the bi/gay incest theme more than the large theme. Your story line is is hot. Keep it going and expand on it with other family and/or relatives/friends heavy or not. Let the nasty sex flow just don't get too caught up in the "large" thing. Great work.
Garbage
What a ridiculous, revolting story. I only read about 1/4 of it, and even that was way too much. Insipid, childish B/S.
Absolute rubbish
I've never left a comment before but I'm really insulted that you should mock obesity problems in this manner. Who WANTS to go out and deliberately get fatter when already showing signs of being a little on the large side? Completely implausible.
Very Sad
So may people have weight problems, I can't believe you wrote something like that.I love reading incest stories. If you would have left out the food part it may have been good
I hate leaving bad reviews
but while the writing is good, this story disturbed me way too much to not put in my two cents. With the problem of overweight kids in the country today, writing about a father who loves his son and wants him fat and unhealthy is awful. There was nothing erotic about this, nothing redeeming at all.
Put This Somewhere Else
It may be "family", but put this in the Gay Male section because I found it sickening and had no interest in reading it.
You don't have to like it
I didn't like the story- it isn't my cup of tea. But I would rather read something that seems to me a little odd, than read the same old boring stories over and over again.I swear, if I read one more story about a girl who comes home from college to seduce her Daddy...
Anyways, kudos to you for writing something that is definitely original. Even if it didn't do it for me. And just to spite everyone else who bags on your story, I'll give it a 100:)
Implausible trash
Nothing erotic or interesting about this bale of crap!
It sure is sad..
I got to tell you that there are, not a few but, bunch of sons of bitches who come visit this site who first read the reviews of a story and despite the fact that that story has already gotten enough negative points that stupid son of a bitch gives a try and wastes his time in reading that...well if that is not enough he writes a few lines in the review as other fuckers have already done...to be honest I am alergic to those sort of people...folks you better be off of me....
If you read those reviews why in the world would you even give a try....I would ask..
UTTER NONSENSE
ABOLUTE NONSENSE
Good writing, try on other themes!
Liked the writing, but feeding n Gaysex isnt my cup of tea.
Made me laugh how many comments it provoked.
oh shut up
why don't you shut up you skinny assholes and bitches unlike you losers I rater date a fat woman then a stupid skinny bitch stupid jocks and cheerleaders
Don't Worry
People really seemed to hate this, but I thought it was very, very good. People need to realize that fetishes differ from person to person, and judging someone for how they feel is was causes predjudice.
interesting
I felt that this was very erotic. you put a lot of detail into the story it made a lot of sense he wanted his son happy and he wanted the pleasure he recieved. It belongs in Incest/Taboo and also Fetish it deserves a double tag.
Some may feel that stuffing their child is wrong well when they read the title and small synopsis they shouldn't have read the story at all.
Very Good I enjoyed this very much
FOLLOW UP
NEED A FOLLOW STORY UP WITH DETAILDS!
FOLLOW UP
NEED A FOLLOW STORY UP WITH DETAILDS!
passenger
it's just a good story. could be best, maybe, with an uncle or an older male parent... godfather or grandpa or etc.
Sequel please
Definitely a sequel is in order.
Great story: here's why!
This isn't a jack-off story tailored to your fantasy. Precisely the point of it!
Dad turns son into a chub nobody else will want to sodomize, gets him all to himself. Son satisfies his hunger for food and sex, and is completely secure in knowing that dad will walk him up the stairs every afternoon and give him sex. The two are locked in an arrangement in which sexual satisfaction is guaranteed. This is what literature is about (read Herman Melville's stories). The two are locked into a cycle of increasing perversion that nobody else will break into. Fascinating!
hot!!
I'm straight and that turned me on! I wish the dad would have tied his son to the chair and mentioned all the food on his face.
Ugggg
Gross
Chubs are appreciative
If you want a bottom guy who enjoys being penetrated for a nice long session, pick a fat guy every time. They are more sensual, more appreciative. They often talk while being given buttsex, expressing their pleasure. Anal tops know about this phenomenon (and even put some chocolates or cookies next to the bed for the bottom to enjoy during the session), a lot of you guys out there just have no feeling for good decadent sex....so you make negative judgments to preserve your sense of purity!
Elegant breaking of taboos
Those of you who want to read erotic stories while still respecting some taboos won't like this story. But notice the really elegant way in which the author breaks taboos--incest taboos, obesity taboos, anal sex taboos, youth sex taboos. The son is successfully using fat as a way of arousing his dad, and getting his dad to sodomize him. That boy knows exactly what he is doing! He knows that if he asks dad for something to eat, what follows will be a session in the bedroom, in which his dad gives him buttsex. Food addiction plus sex addiction, with both partners needing each other more and more....
this is a fine story
Anyone notice that the author is 18 to 22 years old, so maybe still a late teenager? He lists himself as "Large," so probably a nice pudgy boy. I hope he's gotten his dad to fuck him up the ass, over and over again. Why not? Within a family all the cocks and cunts, mouths and assholes should be communal property, at the free disposal of any family member who gets the urge to use them. A dad who feels like sticking his fat veiny prick up his boy's asshole surely has the right to just go ahead and do it. His boy'll cum all over himself, and dad'll unload his big fatherly balls up his boy's tight little twat. There's no stupid jerking off in this family, like everyone's 13 years old. That's a waste of good sperm. Instead, daddy's big load of creamy sperm belongs up his boy's clutching cunt. That's true father and son bonding.
Interesting :)
Its
really funny how a lot of morons come to a dirty site, read a dirty
story, from the taboo category no less, then claim its so 'wrong'! :D
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