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by Anonymous

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by norcal6210/06/10

Has promise, but.

Ending is a little depressing. A little more context development would make the angst more understandable.

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by Anonymous01/23/11

Nice insightful story...

The story hinted at the likely ending throughout - so the ending did not come out of nowhere like the earlier comment seems to assert. Nice story about how most women seem to think about sex, so I think this was a good story, although the previous comment was right about it being a bit depressing, which in my experience is pretty right about most women's attitude to sex.

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