All Comments on 'Eye for an Eye Ch. 2'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Looking forward

Looking forward to more of this developing relationship and the story's possibilites.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Very good story

I read ch2 than went back and read ch1..Very good storyline

and well written.. I'll be waiting for more chapters!!!!

I'm not into sci-fi but I still think you did a very good

job on this story..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great

Please write more this is a very meaningful story. Just as a btw, i thnk u mite be more successful if u implied things and let the reader make there own conclusions about some of the plot details. That way u can clear out any misconcepions if u need to in a later chapter, but can also leave us a bit of freedom with out imagination. I only wish i could write lyk u. Keep going

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
TRYING TO EVEN UP A RELATIONSHIP

is like using a seive to measure HOH. TK U MLJ LV NV

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