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Going To Mary's: The Next Chapter

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by Anonymous

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by cantbuymy07/11/13

I agree and we know that Mary knows so someone will have to tell soon. then he can have them killed.

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by Overthefalls10/08/13

Pretty funny stuff.

Funny how lies pile up and pretty soon you can't remember what's true. She simply got caught up in her desire to cheat. Note to cheaters - if you're making plans to cheat, don't rely on others to cover your tracks. They ALWAYS rat you out. Thanks for putting an ending to another JPB story that needed finishing. There are many other JPB stories for you or others to finish. Keep at it.

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by phil221301/07/14

Is this supposed to be a story?

It's more like a news report on trailer park romances. Not really exciting or interesting. Why did this couple marry? If there was no compatibility in the sex department, why would this skank marry this guy?? Makes no sense. Thanks for the effort.

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by EgoTrixi03/02/14

What was that?...

...This cannot b e called a story, right? 80% is just a summary of the original story and the rest is - nothing!
Damn, you´ve got too much talent to serve us this trash.

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by krosis66603/26/14

If Dave

Had half a brain, he would divorce Mary too! If someone is willing to help another person cheat, that proves that they have no morals, and would cheat themselves, given the right circumstances. At the least, she proved that she couldn`t be trusted any more that her friend.

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by KarenE08/11/14

@krosis666

If I remember correctly Mary WAS screwing Chet, so why doesn't Terri rat her out for not covering for her?

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by ErotFan09/29/14

I think I predicted something like this...

... back at Just Plain Bob's.

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by KarenE10/07/14

Correction and Additions

I have to correct my earlier comment, Mary was screwing Chet BEFORE she married Dave, so there's no ratting out to do.

Why did she have to make things so convoluted? Why not just set up "shopping" trips with Mary?

Why is "poor" sex justification for her cheating? Would she let her husband cheat if he didn't like HER in bed?

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by Anonymous11/10/14

nice story

she got exactly what she deserved. Glad that " SAM " kicked her worthless cheating holes to the curb. It seems that by the statement from KarenE that she's been there and done that. but anyway the story was good and at least you didn't have " SAM " one of those stupid men who fall for all the lies and bullshit she was trying to give him

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by Anonymous01/26/15

She may be screwed

But won''t she get half anyway? And alimony? And since the marital assets are half hers, she'll have the money to get an attorney. No Judge is going to let her show up in Court without representation.

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by Anonymous03/17/15

Got'cha

To bad she didn't get an STD, or that Mary told the truth. Even better video to send out over the internet to family and friends.

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by krosis66604/19/15

Convoluted

But I'm glad you put SOME kind of an ending on that garbage by jpb.

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by sbrooks10308/02/15

Thoughts

From the original story –

“I love him, I really do, but sex is a very powerful urge and a girl has to do what a girl has to do.” – So, if a husband feels that his wife is unsatisfactory sexually, it is okay for HIM to take lovers?

And I wonder if Mary is fucking Sam?

From this story –

“it surely would have led to Dave fucking me. I was positive Sam could never have stood for that in a million years.” – Why not? Sam would be fucking Mary, why should he object to Dave fucking Terri?

And just what DID she tell Sam?

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by tazz31711/12/15

IT IS VERY VERY DIFFICULT TO MAKE CONTIGENCY PLANS

when the matrix over rides the 1st one. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous12/02/15

Yeah that was bullshit

Sam may be mad but he can't throw her out of THEIR house. All she would need to do is go to the Police and then get a lawyer. She'd be right back in. And if he leaves, he can be viewed by the Courts as having abandoned their house and their marriage. Which would screw him in the divorce settlement. And she does have the money. She has HALF of their marital assets. He can't stop her from using their money to hire an attorney. So while I appreciate anyone trying to put an end to the many, many unfinished JPB stories out there, this was a complete and utter failure.

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by sinsational8312/06/15

Nice story

Good story. It was entertaining, and a bit humorous as well. I enjoyed it. as for ANONYMOUS het you need to red some law books or at least get some understanding as to how the real life works when it comes to matters such as this. FYI, he had every right to send her packing and kick her ass out. First of all he filed for divorce. Second, they had NO CHILDREN that would force him to allow his wife to stay in the home. There's no law that would require him to have her stay in the home unless, she was incapacitated either mentally or physically. Other than that, he isn't going against the law in any way. Once their divorce is finalized and the property if defined to who gets what and isn't abided by then she could take him to court. But he's in the clear when it comes to having her leave. Trust me on this one ok ?? I know for a fact this is how it works well..... in three states anyway but its like that pretty much in any state.

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by sinsational8312/06/15

SORRY

Sorry for the typing errors I was in a hurry lol.

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by racfguy01/05/16

Unbelievable

Between JPB's first part and Ohio's second part, this has to be one of the worst stories on Lit.

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by impo_6101/05/16

The problem with these two stories...

The problem with these two stories...None of them was finished...2*

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by betrayedbylove01/27/16

Hmmm...

Fucking cheating whore. She should have been smart but she is what every cheater is. A fucking stupid idiot.

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by sbrooks10303/10/16

Further Thoughts

So Sam’s loving isn’t up to Chet’s. Well boo hoo! I’m sure there are guys who make more money, or are more handsome or are more famous or more whatever than Sam. Does that give her the right to cheat with THEM?

If Sam’s loving isn’t up to par, she has two basic choices: work with him to improve his love-making; or if that doesn’t work, and her sex life is THAT important to her, offer Sam an amicable divorce, and then she can fuck whoever she wants to!

And as others (maybe even me!) have said, would she be okay with Sam looking for sex elsewhere if HE wasn’t happy with HER bedroom performance? I seriously doubt it!

“When Dave heard from Sam about the faked phone call, he got furious at Mary and told her she had to choose between her marriage to him and her friendship with me.” – As I think someone else said, Dave has to be worried that if Mary would cover for Terri’s cheating, that she might cheat also.

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by tigger11904/09/16

@SBrooks103, You missed a very important point.

When you concluded at the end that Mary might be cheating on her husband, you forgot the part where Terri recalled that Mary had introduced her to Chet and that Chet had been Mary's lover before Terri. Mary is also a lying cheating bitch who cheated on her husband. 'nuff said.

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by Anonymous04/09/16

5

for a good read and effort.

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by sbrooks10304/21/16

@tigger119

You made the same mistake someone else made: Chet was Mary's lover BEFORE she married Dave, she WASN'T cheating!

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by Anonymous07/19/16

How it happen?

How it all happen? Easy and I'll explain it with three words. YOU GOT GREEDY

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by Anonymous08/05/16

Justice

Greedy slut bitch got what she deserved - hopefully her life will be a miserable one in a greasy dinner!

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by Tootight108/23/16

good story

Does he know the saying once a cheater, always a cheater. Is he better with her or without her. He obviously doesn't mind his friend having his wife, so why not tell him, unless she only wants the swinging to go one way.

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by Anonymous11/03/16

Stupid

Stupid of her to ask how did all this happen to me. You caused it by cheating on your husband you stupid cunt.

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by Anonymous11/14/16

Somewhat Better

This story started out as unbelievably stupid and went downhill from there. It would, or should, take a moron of a wife to intentionally lead her husband to believe she was cheating. I mean, a few grand to the right gang-banger and almost anyone can be made to "disappear". But no, the stupid bitch insisted on leading her husband on.
This second chapter made the whole thing a little more palatable, but not much. On a higher note, the writing was first-rate.

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