Like your story .Not overly erotic,but quite believable macmaint@excite.com
A good one. It would have been nice to know more about the two characters, the woman especially.
Well written and sounding very honest. Very believable.
I liked that the protagonist actually felt affection and even, in a way, respect for Elena. And of course gratitude too. A well-told bit of erotica, and not over the top as are many stories.
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Like your story .Not overly erotic,but quite believable
macmaint@excite.com
Very well written
A good one. It would have been nice to know more about the two characters, the woman especially.
Very good
Well written and sounding very honest. Very believable.
good erotica
I liked that the protagonist actually felt affection and even, in a way, respect for Elena. And of course gratitude too. A well-told bit of erotica, and not over the top as are many stories.
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Back to A Good Routine or
More submissions by zaraje.