by tabber
Next time he's out hammering, maybe he'll get to nail his neighbour?
It takes an exceptionally fine writer to write such a hot story with few words. And, you did it!
Damn, I'd love to have such a woman for a neighbor.
Do write more.
Thanks.
A really top story and moved along well. Nicely written and exciting to read. A simple tale of everman's fantasy. It did all it was supposed to do.
Very good story. I also liked the comments of the readers. What this neighbour did is something that I would enjoy doing. I always find it exciting to turn someone on...especially unexpectedly. Thanks for the good reading...which of course led to other things :-)
Wish I lived in your neighborhood. I guessed wrong; I thought you were going to have him blow his load while standing on the ladder, as they both played with themselves. Still a happy ending. I think these folks need to continue being neighborly.
I really liked the story, as I am an admirer of people who are comfortable with their bodies and willing to play with others in an outdoor environment. Stacey was hot and at ease, and offered the hope of more encounters. I hope you follow up with more of her activities :-) I like your direct telling of the story, just enough to set it up but without pages and pages of preliminary background. Keep writing, you have talent for the topic.