All Comments on 'Blood and Iron Ch. 13'

Great story, just wish there was more of it. Each chapter seems too short. Please, keep them coming.

delusion, after finding out that his wife and boss, in real life, had been fucking? he went into hiding, thinking they're going to miss him, and then in his loneliness, he started thinking about some fantastical tale about other worldly princesses, with him being a major character or a prince, perhaps? what a bumber!<p>

have the fool wake-up from this fantasy, go back down to town, and dirvorce the cheating wife, AFTER humiliating her and her loverboy! But this Ted Kyczinsky Montana hide-out delusion ---- it is a terrible story, terrible excuse. <p>

any writer who started out about a cheating wife, who fucked herself silly in his and her marital bed, with her boyfriends and have the "hero" go on a humiliated retreat to the mountain, in tears, and then have the hero stumble upon some parallel universe and have him go into some fantastical journeys has NOT thought through carefully! <p>

I mean, which scenario is "more believable"?: (1) the tearful, cuckhold man is in a big denial, up there in his little mountain retreat, having gone into total dulsion, thinking how his wife and boss has humiliated both publically and privately; or (3) him stumbling across a warmhole and has gone on a science-fiction journey into a kingdom of princes and princesses, forgetting his cheating wife on earth? <p> Come on, dear author! LOL

I love the series and those that criticize the plot should not be reading science fiction. A little more explanation into the character's past and about his combat/survival skills could help define the character. I can't wait for more.

Anonymous, are you kidding me? You read 13 chapters of this story and now complain about it! This a great series for sci-fi readers. Keep it comming WarLord. But, don't stop until the ending..too many writers quit before the ending.

very well thought out story line. being a martial artist i can tell you know something about combat arts. the "stepping into an alternate reality" concept is a classic that never goes out of style. your story is like Burrough's "John Carter of Mars" with blowjobs!LOL My only sugestion is to give our hero a little more stamina in the sack and get him thoroughly (and descriptively) laid!

i'm really looking forward to your continuing saga,keep up the good work!

This has, I think, the potential to be a long running and very interesting story, but you have leaped into things just a little too quickly. There needs to be more information for the reader about our hero's previous life, for instance, how he got his martial skills, as he appears simply to have a fully fledged knowledge of these things without us knowing anything about how he got it.

However, this is a minor fault attached to a good story that you should be able to explore much, much further. You writing skills are better than many on Literotica and your use of the English language is on a par with the best authors here. Good luck with "Blood and Iron" and please continue past Chapter 13.

Greetings

Thanx for the kind words. All feedback (even the trollish stuff) is much appreciated.

I am hard at work on Chapter 14 of this saga right now.

As for "back story" of story protagionist? How he came to be who he is in B&I? His history likely better served in another narrative -- a prequal perhaps or maybe his return to his old life for a visit...

But in the meantime chapter 14 is being written and editted

Thanx again for your readership and support.

Enjoy the journey

WarLord

I love stories like these keep writing!!!

It's been over a month now, please don't keep us waiting any longer. I really love this story and it makes me sad when I come on here and the story is not updated :(

Indeed. A story with this much potential should not be abandoned. It would be the dumbest idea in the world to even consider abandoning this story. Keep it coming.

Excellent tale of intrigue and daring do. Can't wait for more of it.

Ramjet

"being written and edited" is now *8 months* ago. Please don't leave us readers hanging - so far, it's been an intriguing and very well written tale.

If you can't get past the cheating wife, then don't read in the sci-fi category, stick with loving wives! You'll get all the cheating and revenge that you want there. lol Other than that, great series, Warlord, and I hope you continue this story.

Hey Warlord..Glad you didn't stop writing this excellent story..Started reading over at EWP..was sad to see that site die but I guess it was bound to..not going to comment on that we were there we know what happened..Again excellent story..hope you get more of your stuff posted over here..cant wait for more..

Thoroughly entertaining! I would enjoy reading more.

will you be concluding it any time soon?

I realize it's been awhile sense the last chapter was posted, and I can only hope that this will somehow notify you, but you have an intriguing story that I really hope you decide to continue. Looking forward to seeing updates!

When might we see the rest of this awesome tale?

rochesterin@yahoo.com

Well, it has been unfinished going on four years, there is little likely-hood that he/she will ever finish it. That is unfortunate because it could be a great story.

I wonder if all of us who comment are simply wasting our time. As likely as not he/she has changed email addresses and doesn't ever see the comments

-- srgeek --

Great so far. Would really like to read more of it please finish.

I am truely enjoying the story. Please do continue. Needful of following the adventure.

i had long since given up on the fantasy section as most couldn't keep my intreast but this one is great and my only whine is for more

Stinking unfinished stories are th curse of this whole site.

This is by far a favourite of mine. Please do continue this wonderful story.

your story is an excellent read please continue.

this author had a disease or something and has only recently recuperated... if you want to know more about him and more of his other stories visit

http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Warlord/

i think someone should finnish this story please

I guess this is another great story that will never be finished.

This story is just at its peak. Please finish the story. Its awesome.

This is a story of great potential and I am saddened by it's long overdue update. To the author, please finish this story as I am head over heels crazy over the world you have created. Oh, and for crying out loud, give the man more romps in the sack. LOL.

I have read this several times over the years, and I do wish it would be continued.

I've only just found this story very disappointed that it's not been continued, does anyone know what has happened to the author? If he/she is no longer available would someone else be willing to continue this story?

acording to twitter account still alive asof 2016. However suffers from crohns disease since 2007 i believe and cannot get a hook on these old stories since 2012. I don't believe he will ever finish any of the stuff on literorica,asstr and SOL.

Any chance of continuing this story.

I have enjoyed your story. Have you published elsewhere? under what name?

When will you continue Blood and Iron