Why do you use such long paragraphs? A bit difficult in Lit's format. I've read a few of your stories but have given up as you seem to write monologues without dialogue. Sorry.
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A bit dense.
Why do you use such long paragraphs? A bit difficult in Lit's format.
I've read a few of your stories but have given up as you seem to write monologues without dialogue.
Sorry.
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