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A Night Out

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by Barno03/27/07

Kind of petered out

I can excuse your slip on the name Jill. Mixing up names happens more often than you think. Yet there just wasn't much depth in the plot. The story while wll written just wasn't that exciting

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by Anonymous03/27/07

could have been

a very hot story. Sarah, Jill, Sarah.....

anyway, the teasing is HOT. most writers think that foreplay consists of oral sex. teasing is fun and hot. its erotic.

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by Anonymous03/27/07

Jill??

Confused by name mix up and what would have been hot was to have sex during the movie!

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by Alvaron5303/28/07

Nice

Pretty good read except for the name snafu. The teasing was quite erotic.

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