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Yeah, humorous? Maybe...
The problem with this story, and it was funny in its own way, was the author's penchant for turning the male protagonists' in his other works into cuckolds. I did not feel very comfortable at the end of both of these stories as it seemed to be a sideways homage to cuckolding wives. A bit of subterfuge. Too many loopholes, and the moralizing at the end rings rather hollow. Their is so much pain and misery in the cheating wives stories of this author, and others, that it seems rather disingenuous.
I think Lit should just go ahead and make up a separate category, Cheating Wives/Cuckold, and let those who enjoy that sort of thing post there, and maybe leave the Loving Wives category to stories of actual loving wives, as opposed to those selfish, vicious vixens who populate the whole cuckold genre. Don't even get me started on the BBC propagandists here and elsewhere.
Yeah, I know, lighten up.
A big big five stars
Ok, I admit it. I haven't been burned by my wife. Maybe if I had, I would be as cynical as many of the other commentators are. But nothing in Mary's behavior indicates disrespect for Charlie. I would believe her too. Charlie very nearly hurt Mary very badly. Instead, he turned it around and made her love for him feel vindicated. It hit me right in the gut; I sure wasn't expecting a move that wise from Charlie. Very touching!
hahaha
revasectomified....lmao
frustrating!!!!
Nobody who is normal could live with this situation.
Scum
Cheating, betrayal, life destroying actions. This is dark shit. It is evil. You are causing pain and suffering for your own personal enjoyment. Cheating is not supposed to be entertainment. It's just as fucking disgusting as murder, gore, rape. If an author also doesn't warn about the evil contents of a story, then they Deserve ever harsh word that comes their way.
As for this story, I didn't care for it much. Spineless wimp. Wife should have insisted on the test anyway because most guys would start to wonder if they changed their minds and the wife went along with it so easy. Now it will hang over them forever and will likely be the cause of later strife. Always verify. Nobody never lies.
very funny
is revasectomified a real word? if not it should be! 5*
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