Sorry Charlie, Part Deux

Loved It

Great story, I had tears in my eyes because I laughed so hard at some parts, especially the masterbation part of the story.

Good Job

It's great to read a story when the author does such a good job.Yes,A great job of writting Charlie as a stupid ass hole.

Awesome Story

After all poor Charlie went through, it's great to see how everything worked out in the end. I especially liked that, for a change, trust won out and a husband believed his wife.

I'm only waiting to see all the naysayers whining about her being a cheating slut, etc. since that's the only possible scenario they can believe in. Makes me wonder how pathetic their love lives are.

'Great read and funny as hell!'

Thanks, we needed a good laugh today! Obviously, this compliments your other good work and efforts. Well done!

Another nice job - funny as hell!

I probably would have put it in Humor and Satire again, but no big deal.

Charlie had better realize what a gem of a wife he has - sooner rather than later.

Regards, Jack

Great Job

The guy finally got it right. Funny story and a great point at end. Thanks

Okay

Well written, but superficial. I disagree with the premise of the story. Frankly, people lie but DNA can't.

Great

you got me laughing, w/c in my book, is a good thing.

A rollicking good read

Got more'n one belly laugh out of it. Thank you, LYG.

I think that maybe Charlie's leap of faith wasn't so blind after all. Thanks again for a great read.

P.S. Was that leap of faith or leapyearguy of faith? :D

Sorry, Charlie. :D

complete nonsense

if it was place under "humor and satire," I won't say it is a complete nonsense, since that is the category for humor and satire. but since it is place under loving wives, I must say it is a complete nonesense...

Starts out so hilarious and ends in moralizems

It was really a scream and a hilarious piece till you had and go and get moralistic at the end. By most standards his realization of not really needing proof would normally have led to a huge hug from his wife. Then a demand he have the sperm count done as it would just show how much she appreciated his realization of his trust in her, and she would want it to never be even a small thought to cross any of their minds again. She would see her loving husband was scared of “what if” not of distrust. The mind can play tricks with our reason as we face a fear we never dreamed would come up. He would be required to have a sperm test done before a second vasectomy would be performed by any doctor anyway.Very nice little story and the first two thirds were just so very funny and uplifting.Thanks for the entertainmentPT

Just a good piece and so much to savor

I have read this again and I have to vote a 100 as your writing is just too good to put a stupid 75 up there.Sorry for the rant about moralistic as you had me laughing so hard I hated to stop when the story got serious.Again I’m sorry for the first score.PT

Nice job!

Good work, leapyearguy. You continued the humor from Part 1 and ended up making solid philosophical observation. There will be plenty of folks who say Charlie is a fool. He may be. But if he is, he is a happy fool in a world HE chose. He is the master of his fate, the captain of his soul. Time and fate may prove that he is delusional and destroy his happiness, but as Part 1 illustrated, that can happen at any time.

Pathetically STUPID is funny?

since when? what a fucking loser this guy is

Cannot anyone just laugh a little?

Does anyone who reads this section have a sense of humor about the fantasies that appear here? More people get themselves in a twist in the Loving Wives section than any other. The verbal assaults on the authors here are amazingly vitriolic.

Get a life!

This is fiction. The author's imagine a situation and run with it. If you do not like it, leave it.

The author of the story clearly gets how silly this section can be and uses irony, satire, and verbal bumbling of a character to laugh a little about something that some people take far too literally here. Men cheat! Women cheat! The authors' write about this not to make some deep, serious point, but rather to consider the what if's of the situation, the possibilities.

This author had some fun and and he did it very well. Can the readers not just go with it.

Good read

Great continuation from the first 'Charlie'.
I liked the sense of fun and all the malapropisms...
Not often you find a cleverly written story on Lit.

Difference between Comedy and stupidity

There is a difference between comedy and stupidity, but apparently this writer is not aware of the difference. --a sad excuse for what is supposed to be humor or satire.
the CT. Yankee

More!

Every time you decide to get funny, my belly hurts! Comedic writing is an art of it's own and you are very good at it. I will always welcome one of your humor stories. A great continuation and very well done!

Hmmmm, would the wife who did not want kids

accuse him of not being snipped if she was pregnant? The wife is to sure he is the father knowing he had been snipped. Yeah, I would have had the test done, and then tested the DNA of the little bugger as it popped out if I had not had it done while it was in the womb, yes it can be done. Funny, sorry I didnt think it funny, stupid perhaps, brainless more to the point. Wonder how many proud fathers are paying to raise their wifes bastards?

LOVING WIVES

Isn't this the category? Not sluts want big black cocks, Not you can't trust the lying cheating gutter slut, not I want to suck the cum out of your cunt category. There was real true deep love here. I wish more writters would realize this. Thank you LYG, I loved the story. And to the last commentor, ask your dad how much it cost to raise you. then you'll have the answer to your question!

Very good

Very humorous tale.. Actually, every marriage needs that much trust.. It'll not last long without it.. Enjoyed this story very much!!

Trust But Verify

Assuming for the moment that the wife is truthful, Charlie's action is great and a wise one. The followup to that would be to quietly get a DNA check for paternity after the baby is born for his own peace-of-mind.

Vasectomies do fail. It is even more common for spouses to fail in their responsibility to be faithful. The test would just be a little reassurance of which failure took place here.

Finally if the result showed that she had failed she would have failed at least twice. The first failure would have been the physical failure which resulted in the pregnancy, the second failure would have been lying to try to hide her infidelity.

Just my own thoughts.

It shines through

Your sense of humour shines through all of the crap that some previous comments contain. Excellent story!!

refreshing

humour is always a good thing. so ia sex. makes life alot better.

Love, love, love it!!!

NOW THIS IS WHAT I CALL A STORY!!! Believable situation and people. Not just some mindless black men hammering some white brainless twits or vice-versa. If I wanted to read a stroke story I would just go to the erotic coupling category, pick any of the submission and jack myself off._____LYG, thanks for such fine, sensible, humouress yet heart-warming story.

Loved the two stories.

Now, to pick a nit. Bags of ballons for kids are readily available at many of the same places condoms are sold and certainly at the places a faithful wife would frequent. The wife's explanation of the condom usage is pretty lame although in keeping with the comedic tone of the story. Personally, I'd get a DNA test done on the kid. Thanks for writing. Phil

Bullshit

Even worse than the other one.

Very entertaining

Great story. I laughed out loud at both the Charlie stories. Thanks, to one of the best story tellers here.

Loved it!

If the first one was so horrible why did he read the sequel and bother to respond? What an asshole, probably dumb as a box of rocks to boot. Maybe he didn't leave his name because he can't spell it? Keep up the great writing! Hope you don't mind me picking on your heckler. It is fun and I really enjoy it!!!!! (Don't suppose he's hearing voices of former bad literary critics in his head?)

Even Funnier Than the First One

Both parts were terrific. LYG knows how to write.

Charlie's medical annals - encore!

This one was funnier than the first installment; kind of a high toll for follow ups!

Good ending but...

They're too old to even want kids.(Sorry Charlie)Pistolpackinpete

Really good story but...

...it still did not answer the question that CapeCodMercury raised after the first part. What was it that Doc. Bob and Mary wanted to talk to Charlie about that they never did?

In this installment there is a new doctor and a pregnant wife even though Charlie had been "vasectomized". There is a fleeting reference to Mary cheating "a year ago" which she also fleetingly denied. Was that supposed to mean something? Was Dr. Bob the father of the new baby boy?

The humor was there, but so was an element of seriousness in Charlie's ruminations about trust. There were a lot of questions left for the reader. Did the author have Mary's affair in mind and then decide to change it without removing the reference to it (What Bob and Mary wanted to talk to Charlie about.) Had it been going on for some time, and did it, in fact, continue into the second installment?

We can never know the answers to these questions unless the
author tells us. And if he decided to change that element of the story, that is his prerogative. But, gosh...a lot of questions remain to distract the reader.

Trust but verify

If the husband does does not verify that the child is his, will his mind ever be truly at rest? Could his wife truly believe the child was her husband's knowing he might not be? Could she have played a dangerous game of chicken with her husband, hoping he would not go through with the sperm test? Of course there is the possibility, even to a cynic like me, that she is on the level. A quiet DNA test would resolve the mystery.

Cute. Potentially funny. Trust but verify. DNA is EASY.

To many unanswered questions. This guy is on the edge mentally anyway. HE REALLY NEEDS to verify. If the kid is his GREAT, if not well, then he can kick her and her bastard kid to the curb.

Nice try at humor.

The hero

Acts like a hysterical screaming faggot. Always screaming in his mind about something.
For the sake of your plot, you got your hero to talk about his betrayal of his wife. Huh? Could you kindly grab a dictionary and look up the word?
Oh and it's wrap not rap.

Butt

YouD still do a sperm count test so the forMer doctor could pay for vasectomy #2 and maybe some damages.

Wouldn't the new doctor insist on doing a sperm count before re-doing the vasectomy just to cover his ass with his insurance carrier, follow procedures and pad his bill?

Trust. Trust. Oh yes, I recall now, that was an ancient concept that

was pretty much discarded by all involved sometime between Watergate and Monica Lewinsky...

LOL great setup

Trust comes from ???????

He was given bad medical evidence not once but multiple times and had challenged his faith in his wife and lost once already -

The conflicting evidence now has him trying to figure our where the best quality of life lay? You set this chapter up well - taken alone we say do the tests, any and all, test for sperm now DNA later - BUT - in this context is it the right choice???

Great question I liked your answer - even if I might not have the faith to go there -

nagging thoughts

Sorry Charlie, shoulda waited for the results.

dna

Simple have the test
get proof

Jesus Fucking Christ! Will somebody just kill this fucker already!

Loved these two stories.

Don't know how I missed these stories until now but I am glad I found them this morning. Both parts of the story were a joy to read and both scored a 5 with me. Should have been tens but 5 was the max allowed. I guess now I will have to go back and read more of your stories to see what other gems I have missed.
KK

A newer story on the horizont?

Do I read well K.K. is on the board again?

Damn

No rating. If in doubt, check the DNA. Trust and love don't work.

in god we trust

Trust but verify.

DNA Test

After the child was born he could have a DNA test without her knowing...

THE OLD SAYING PROVES CORRECT

Mama Baby.....Daddy Maybe...TK U MLJ LV NV

Is it possible a vasectomy doesn't work right? Yes. Is it more probable she is carrying another man's baby? Yes. If she can't handle confirmation post birth then she isn't being realistic. Simply another closet cuck story.