Aiding and Abetting

This one worked for me

It seemed a bit abrupt but overall I enjoyed it. And thank God you had a non-clueless male in the pack

Great work

I love the combination of romance and humor!

GUILT BY ASSOCIATION

and with a known associate. TK U MLJ LV NV

ya done good, LYG!

The dining scene towards the end was priceless! The build up to the love was masterful. Great job!

you have to be fucking kidding me

i can't even begin to quit laughing at how you write. good story and the lines are just funny as hell. happy times for all, except viv.

Sweet!

That says it all.

Thank you for sharing your story with us.

Hard to believe...

... but cute all the way.

Very good job, thanks!

Excellent

that was a cute romantic story. well written. good job

Thank you

Funny, sexy, smart, and romantic.

Top stuff !!

...and what a laugh too...

Thanks for a great story.

GREAT AND UNIQUE

Very very unique story. Can't remember reading another story on Literotica where a lesbian and a straight guy fall in love. Story was well written . . .and funny.

madbrown

see "people are strange" by cantbuymy

took to long

To find this story. Very well written an most enjoyable. Thanks

Funny story

Your story was not only touching and erotic, it was also extremely funny. I tried to imagine myself in his shoes and it was hilarious!

Awesome!
Your line about abusing Don Jr cracked me up! 5 stars from me!

awesome

Awesome.... It was no less funny and LOVELY even the 7th time :)
Loved it.. Keep on writing... Will love to read more like this :)

Wow

I had tears in my eyes after finishing this story. While that isn't completly uncommon it was definitly the first time that it was from laughing so hard lol.

DELICIOUS!

Absolutely deliciously funny and moving! 5 stars.

So right on so many levels!

A first rate story! Another one that should be a movie script!

Wonderful blend

That was funny and sweet I didn't know if I should laugh or cry,so did both.

Lol

Engaging and funny, loved it.

does that mean you are not a lesbian anymore? got to love that one. always a 5 even on a re-read.

Dad is just the best

That line is a classic - an you know the delivery was as deadpan as an old skillet.

Great storyline - girl thinks she knows who and what she is until she is exposed to something different and nice - anything is possible - not all actions are choices but many choices are reversible.

Holy Crap!!!

Loved it!
Kuddos to Ben!

Thx!

Wow

4th Re-read and still enjoying it. Great job and thanks for sharing.

Every time I re-read this story it still makes me feel good

Some great comic asides and a great story.

Excellent and humerous

Every time I read it I laugh, great piece of writing. Thanks

I wish I could give this 6 stars

One of the best, thank you

after several re-reads

Still really like it.
The only down sides are the last two sentences (a bit cliche in comparison to the rest of the writing), and the ease of the female protagonists' switch. She is, now, not lesbian but living with someone who is bisexual isn't necessarily a walk in the park.

Still - the thing that would make me happiest is to see more of your work.

Green-something

After A Second Reading

Just a fast paced and enjoyable story with enough twists and turns to keep it interesting. Dad's comments at the end were great. Good read, look forward to reading more from you

Humorous and Romantic

Loved it!

Thank you for sharing your story with us.

LOVED IT

Superb story. This is the forth time I have read it. BRILLIANT.
More like this please.

Brilliant!

Great entertainment. Thanks for writing it.

*5 stars*

This was the most fun story I've ever read, couldn't stop laughing for more than a few sentences. Thank you for this.

brilliant ending

Too funny!

PERFECT ENDING TO A FUNNY EROTIC STORY! BRAVO!!!

Excellent

A great tale. What a way to discover love. Almost sounded like a fairy tale. A very hip fairytale but you get my drift.

was feeling really down before i read this, could'nt stop laughing, a great story thank you for cheering me up..

this

this is not the first time I have read this and like other commentators have said, was feeling a little blue when I stumbled on this story and reread. is fun funny and blues killing.

Funny As All Get Out.

The dialog was snappy and punchy, and I loved the main character's sarcasm.

The Windex is in the: "Wall safe. Behind the Rembrandt."

Wish I'd thought of that.

Wonderful Feel Good Story.

Humerous, touching, and pretty damn hot. What's not to love? Not my first time reading it, and it won't be my last.

I laughed so hard.........

I had tears in my eyes. 'slept like an insomniac in a church bell tower " geez. Good line. I want to see if I can member that one!

Great story, loved the plot and the pace.

I don't give many 5's

But this one is definitely worth it.
Thank you for a fun read.

This one scores on many points

I sure others have commented on the wit/humour of this piece - I was chuckling about 200 words in and that just kept up

Nice mix of sexy & great pace

Very nice - thanks a lot

Great Story

I've read this a few times and can't get tired of it. This is a great story!

5 Stars

Keep up the good work!

"Candy, does this mean you're not a lesbian any more?"

best line in story.

Second read of this one...and i probably will again!

Simply outstanding - great pacing, humor and hotness - love it!

Forgot I read this before...

So I started to read it again... when I remembered I'd read it once by then I was hooked into reading it again...
I can't believe I forgot about it... loved it just as I'm sure I did l last time... and likely just as I will if I ever read it again...
Thanks for the effort, well worth my time...

I re-read it and love it even more than before

Upgraded from Romance to All-Time Favorite bookmarks; definitely want to find my own "Candy"

Thx;
DKP

Everything

Funny, romantic, sexy, well written. What else do you want?