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What a fantasy!
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com
Fabulous story!
Well written, both entertaining and funny. Dad was priceless. Well played. Why can't more stories be like this?
Dad
Dad was the best
That was precious. your handling of the story was pure genius. truly worthy of the 5 stars plus more.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com
Part 2
She enjoyed playing the heterosexual daughter for her parents sake, the went back to fucking women - after she dumped Don, or after she married Don. Either way, a Zebra can't change it stripes. Don had his heart broken again, but had only himself to blame for getting involved with a woman that he knew had her wires crossed.
Since I see I posted last February and if wasn't my first reading back then...
obviously I'm enjoying reading and re-reading this little gem.
A couple of things I noted this time around...
Just because she had been IN a lesbian relationship didn't mean she WAS a lesbian... She could just as easily be bi and not have known it...
Also, funny to think that, if this family were more honest with each other on a regular basis, that Don and Candy would most likely have never gotten together and Candy would have, instead, been just one step from having her significant other cheat on her when it would have hurt her more...
Oh, by the way, did I mention enjoying this...? Because clearly it can't be said enough... =]
Comidy
Out of the pages of George Burns and Gracie Allen
Ending
There has to be a better way to end a good story than with a pun. That's the only thing that bothers me about your work. Great story.
Great Story Telling*****
Very entertaining story. Thanks for sharing.
ROFLMAO!!!!!
That was great, nobody pulled any wool over on Ben, LOL's, and two people went where they should have been in the first place. Loved it, Great Story...
Really, really good......
One of the best stories I've read on here..... just a tad, 'ride off into the sunset' together, but good nonetheless......
Perfect.
Wow!
What a wonderful story, and I can't wait to read more of them. This one is definitely going into my favorite's list. Keep up the great work!
MoogPlayer
Sweet!
Still wonderful the second time around.
Thank you for sharing your stories with us.
Brujay
Hell Yeah!
I really liked THAT!
Nice Read
Really nice read, thoroughly enjoyed it, keep writing!
Perfection!
Haven't read a story that I liked better! Outstanding from beginning to end! Don,Candy,Cynthia,and Ben are memorable characters and I'll be looking to read this one again around Thanksgiving.
I came here to fap....
...But all I got were some feels. I am ok with this.
Gets better with every read
This is probably my fourth time reading this story, and I think I enjoy and appreciate it a little more each time. Top-notch writing, great character development for such a short story, some truly funny dialog and a heart-warming story all make this one of the most satisfying reads on Lit. I figured it was about time to give you some well-deserved kudos.
better each time
It just gets better every time I read it. Waiting on the follow up story on Don and Candy.
Ron
cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
A CLASSIC
In every way shape and form I love romance and humor and this story is THE! Best story of them all! Thanks I love you all! Bye . Greg oh also it's worth every star!
Priceless!
This has to be one of the most outstanding tales I've ever read. Keep up the great work.
MoogPlayer
I also just re-read...
and enjoyed just as much...very likable characters, great dialogue.
Another Repeat of a Hit
Second or third time I've read this one.
Keep up the good work.
Ramjet
Fun read
Even though it's been posted for almost nine years it's a wonderful fantasy. I enjoy rereading it about every six months.
one of my fave stories here
one of a very short, but fun reading list :)
ROMANCE & HUMOR GOOD COMBINATION
I so loved this story! I have read it over and over again. It's very good! You hit all the right buttons on this one. Thank You! Love you all! Bye. Greg.
WHAT'S WRONG WITH A HAPPY ENDING
A fun story, I hope their holiday get together would be the first of many as a couple..
A FUN READ
It is a feel good story, have read it more the once. Her Mom and dad were great characters. One thing though, you would think her could afford a bigger place if he had a Rembrandt on the wall???? (Just kidding). Liked the humor.
OMG!!!!!!!!
Wonderful, great story, great humor, great sex. One of the best stories I've read on literotica. Thank you so much. Going to check out your other stories now.
Ha Ha Ha!!!
Man what an amazing read! Full of fun. . Nice story dear.Don Jr. I kinda like when that is given a character of his own. Cos it does think differently in the real world
Great funny story man!!
Dude you sure know to write witty dialogues. I almost felt that the character was real, such close was to reality. Believe me, you do need to continue that tale... haven't read such a gr8 refreshing story ina lon time. keep up d gud work.. all the best!!!
Great
Very different from the other "wife sleeping winth another man" stories on the site !!
Enjoyed the story!.
Unappealing
Totally unappealing. Made it through 3 pages.
Great Story
I couldn't stop laughing. Unfortunately, some of the feminazises and the girly boys such as sugna didn't appreciate your plot. Hey sugna rather than attempting to rewrite someone else's story, why don't you write your own story so the rest of us can complain about your writing technique.
Great, fun story!
This must be the 4th or 5th time I have read this story. I enjoyed it just as much if not more than the first time that I read it. Ben cracked me up with his "does this mean you're not a lesbian any more?" line. The whole thing was happy and upbeat which I especially appreciate. Keep it up, please!
Utterly predictable. I am glad to read that Ben was not totally oblivious to his daughter's proclivities.
Well written, but a bit long.
A Favorite
They thought they had the wool pulled over Ben's eyes but he got them in the end. It could have been longer but it was really good. It was a fun read having Drama, Love, Sex and Fun in it. I know that it is an older story but I would like to read more about the family and grankids.
Ron
cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
Wonderful story
enjoyed reading it and even lmao a couple of time. Thanks!
5 star
a great funny story!
Still Great
This is, I think, my third time through this story and it is still one of the best
written stories I've seen on Lit. And I'm not talking about content, I'm talking
about just plain technically good writing. Although I did like the story too.
I didn't notice up front if LYG gave credit to an editor, but regardless, the
author (and editor) should be proud of a damn well written story.
Better than 5-stars
Also my thjird time through this, and it just resonates with me.
truly Original
Congratulations. The story is unique and expertly narrated. Thanks for sharing.
Yes
Luv this story. Well done. Fun read.
Funny and adorable story
A story very funny and very enjoyable to read. Sometimes, life circumstances gives great surprises.
And never forget that parents can know and understand more than we think, we are or do.
I was laughing while reading, especially the final pages and confrontation with Vivian, it was very nice and fun.
5* for you.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
Perfection
I love this story. Sexy, funny, happy ending. That equals perfection in my book!
excellent!
very funny entertaining read. thankyou.
Funny!
Very easy to read and very enjoyable story. Two parts that made me laugh out loud: the part where they broke the first lovers face when she was told her hard plastic penis was no match for the real thing, and when they thought they had fooled her dad but he knew she was in a relationship with a woman, he said does that mean she's not a lesbian anymore? There were more funny parts that just had e. Smiling.
Five Stars.
CHARMING!
Delightful, Funny, Wonderful story! This is the first of your work I have read, but Will Not be the last! Thank You... OUTSTANDING!
Alright I Am Ready For The Boo Birds
I have several family members who have had lesbian experiences. But I noticed in each case, they were happiest when they had returned to the treasured values of heterosexual love. I have a young high school cousin who makes no secret of her lesbian proclivities. But she never seems truly happy. So, in stories like this, a major part of me is pulling for the right man to enter her life. So, with happy tears in my eyes, I award this story 5 stars. And a very serious "Thank you."
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