Well written. Looking forward to the next chapter. Makes you wonder if the sisters are setting him up for something. Like they've done this before.
Bring us more! Nicely done.
It started out good, but then it ended.. it was kinda short.. way short, even compared to other short stories :( Oh well, it was still enjoyable, and fairly well-written
I could see in my mind's eye everything that happened. Can't wait to read the second part!
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Nice
Well written. Looking forward to the next chapter. Makes you wonder if the sisters are setting him up for something. Like they've done this before.
Continue!
Bring us more!
Nicely done.
Good so far
It started out good, but then it ended.. it was kinda short.. way short, even compared to other short stories :( Oh well, it was still enjoyable, and fairly well-written
So VIVID!
I could see in my mind's eye everything that happened. Can't wait to read the second part!
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