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The Story
I really like the story you told with this poem.
unspoken moments
yet understanding every word- Nice poetry!
woven
in spinning clever lines ...I enjoyed the feeling it leaves behind...blue
Sober, stained yet love
I liked the poem for the restrained quality of its statements and for the rhythm which made me feel that it could have been used as great lyrics for a heart wrenching folk song, telling of the pains and understanding (of sorts) learned in some relations.
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I enjoy the powerful emotional undercurrent present in this piece; so subtly written of yet with such a strong presence.
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