A true story,because it certainly reads like it,more of this please as you say when you are ready.
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Anonymous02/01/08
Let's have some imagination please
I've read some version of his story at least 25 times--This was neiter the worst or the best
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Anonymous02/01/08
Good Work keep it going
good work lets see some more on this.
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Anonymous02/01/08
Good stuff......
Great work, but as another reader mentioned..... don't rush it.
I would have enjoyed it more if it would've continued where she saw he had a hard on and told him to go ahead n take care of it. then slowly move on from there.
hope to see more of your work.
I look forward to more of this story line... Please do not rush it too much, but you also don't want ot put the breaks on. You have developed a pace of action, let's see where you go with this.
Kisses-
Lisa
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Anonymous02/01/08
Good realistic story
Nice work. More mom's should be willing to help their son's out. It would really help and eliminate a lot of boy's problems and frustrations.
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Anonymous02/02/08
WOW
Think this was a great story.Hope ou plan on a second chapter,especially if its true srory.I love the feeling of my wifes panties and she loves it when i wear then for i too am hard all the time when i wear them.Keep up the good work hope you get to fuck her in the future
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Anonymous02/07/08
mother
reminds me of my mom when she done that jackoff scene with me the first time. I had come home from a date with blue balls and she called me into her bedroom....she was lying there, watching Johnny Carson, as this was 1973. She asked what I had in my pants and smiled, motioned me to come to her and she put her palm on my hardon and squeezed about five times. I shot right there. The next nite we started out torrid love affair,which lasted for about ten years, until she died.
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Anonymous04/21/08
Good incest
Good incest. If more moms took care of their sons' needs the world would be a happier and better place. Keep writing stories like this. Some of us enjoy masturbating as we read them.
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Anonymous06/11/09
great story but?
Wonderful story but you stopped too soon. What you have is a great beginning.
IS THIS
A true story,because it certainly reads like it,more of this please as you say when you are ready.
Let's have some imagination please
I've read some version of his story at least 25 times--This was neiter the worst or the best
Good Work keep it going
good work lets see some more on this.
Good stuff......
Great work, but as another reader mentioned..... don't rush it.
I would have enjoyed it more if it would've continued where she saw he had a hard on and told him to go ahead n take care of it. then slowly move on from there.
hope to see more of your work.
Nice...
I look forward to more of this story line... Please do not rush it too much, but you also don't want ot put the breaks on. You have developed a pace of action, let's see where you go with this.
Kisses-
Lisa
Good realistic story
Nice work. More mom's should be willing to help their son's out. It would really help and eliminate a lot of boy's problems and frustrations.
WOW
Think this was a great story.Hope ou plan on a second chapter,especially if its true srory.I love the feeling of my wifes panties and she loves it when i wear then for i too am hard all the time when i wear them.Keep up the good work hope you get to fuck her in the future
mother
reminds me of my mom when she done that jackoff scene with me the first time. I had come home from a date with blue balls and she called me into her bedroom....she was lying there, watching Johnny Carson, as this was 1973. She asked what I had in my pants and smiled, motioned me to come to her and she put her palm on my hardon and squeezed about five times. I shot right there. The next nite we started out torrid love affair,which lasted for about ten years, until she died.
Good incest
Good incest. If more moms took care of their sons' needs the world would be a happier and better place. Keep writing stories like this. Some of us enjoy masturbating as we read them.
great story but?
Wonderful story but you stopped too soon. What you have is a great beginning.
Good start. Very sexy. Can't wait to read the rest of the series.
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