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By The Pool Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/04/08

A very hot series indeed

I prefer a a series where each Ch. can stand on its own,whatever this is still very erotic

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by Anonymous02/04/08

Top Much Teasing

The series could be so much better if there was not so much teasing,if ever there was a case for longer multi page stories this is it.

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by dfwlisa02/04/08

Loving it...

Love to see what comes next, or who cums next.
I love the tease, the build up and the anticipation. You are doing a good job of keeping me very wet and very ready.

Kisses and Licks-

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by Anonymous06/03/08

fucking awesome

Man I hope you didn't quit writing. These stories are awesome, but I sure would like to read that his mother decides that she is jealous of Joy and decides to fuck him.

Keep writing man, you are one of the better ones on here.

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by Sex4lf5708/06/14

Very hot though I wish the dialogue was a bit sexier.

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