Waleterio writes excellent erotic stories and we all benefit from his [perverted] talents. Please keep it up, author! You are a cock-spurtingly good porn writer. What more can one say? More, please. Don't despair for the lack of commentary.
Walterio, as you know, I am a long time fan and always on the look out for more great tales from you. This tale was great and reminiscent of your epic “And Mother Makes Four”, offering to keep our mouths watering while waiting for the next chapter (there will be a next chapter or many loyal fans will be pissed!). I loved the open ending with Sally fucking herself furiously as she imagined Jack fucking her with his big cock. Like us, she can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the good work! Best wishes, Pete.
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Anonymous04/06/07
I guess I'm not one to jump on your
band wagon. The story left me cold. He did this, he did that and no emotions or feelings. It was too pat and too tab a goes to slot bish. sorry.
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Anonymous04/06/07
Not your genre
I see from your profile that you have traversed many a story type, this is not your forte, I assure you. Sex is not just about filling holes. It has many more implications and for you to jump on the bandwagon of stereotypes that gays are permiscuous and flakey when it comes to sex is not good for anyone in any community. Stick to what you know next time.
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Anonymous04/07/07
Gays always want their holes filled
Gays are always horny. They don't care who they do it with. Or which hole gets filled by flesh or cucumber or carrot. Just fill the gay hole with something.
This is a great story which can't be torn down by posers. If you think you can write better, have at it.
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Anonymous04/07/07
Right on Target in many ways!
Any gay that has ever come on to me was interested in one thing and that was having one of his holes filled. Your story is right on target regardless of what others say. This is a story about lust not love and the readers should understand that. I am looking forward to the next chapter when Sally gets her wish. I hope Linda finds some love in Europe either male or female in a subsequent chapter. Keep writing this is great stuff. Also don't forget to give us another chapter in the Tennis story!
Not all gays are so promiscus but we all love a big cock and a good fuck. Will I ever be lucky enough to live this story? Doubt it. Would I if I could? Oh yes, take me any way and every way you want.
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Anonymous03/12/08
fucking gr8 story
tats one of my favorite gay story i can say tat this story make me cum 7 TIMES
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Anonymous03/29/08
woow
this is one of the best. I love the way you give the reader an attention-getter like that. wow you kept me hard from beginning to end.
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Anonymous03/07/09
If it sounds familiar, it is.
I started to read this story and realized that it was starting off just like another one I just read. The idea is hot but it's become formulaic -- so I just stopped.
You're one of the best writers of erotic stories at Literotica. Really enjoy whatever the subject.
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Anonymous06/10/09
great sex
reminds me of my younger years
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Anonymous03/22/10
In Lee Jack has everything he needs
Jack has no need for his girlfriend Linda anymore, let alone her mother Sally... Linda's younger brother Lee has everything Jack could possibly want. Why waste that beautiful big cock in Linda's sloppy pussy (or her mother's for that matter) when he can fuck Lee's tight ass as much as he wants?
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Anonymous04/15/10
Meh
This could have been hot but there were too many girls. Also, Jack's an idiot. Why would he need Linda or Sally when he has Lee? This story sucked because of that.
This is how my older brother got to fuck me the first time. He stayed with his girl friend for awhile but after several months, I was his exclusive fuckee, and still am.
Why not make it 3 feet rather then 9” might believe it then. Ok you might be 9’ or at least 9’ when your dreaming but write realistic. I might be large and I'm not advertising what it is but if I was writing I would go something believe able go 7’ if you must… Be daring and go 3’. Would make a much better read. I know when I am reading this, I am going for scene and plot not imagined facts. If you really want to be 9’ don't say it, just leave it as large, no more expressive and your readers can fit a size 8’, 9’, 11’, or 1’7” it doesn't matter.
I decided to forgive your size issues (maybe they are like people with daddy issues) but sorry it was very disappointing story and I just don't know how to make it worse then disappointing because I would if iI could. I got about 5 pages through, and it was all bad, this doesn't mean you can’t write, but the story was just plain bad boring.
Must say by the description, thought it would be good. And if you or anyone cares my penis was deflating/shrinking rapidly as I read.
Worst story I have read here, and my reading count is in the 1000’s over the last 10 years.
I do read some reviews before reading but often not, but to anyone who is, don't waste your time reading.
Anyone who says my id isn't that old, I use to read anonymously.
I thought this was s great fun fuck story. I'm definitely going to continue on.
Oh, and I feel really sorry for your sex life if you can't even believe in a 9" cock in an imaginary sex story. It always disappoints me when someone writes about a big cock being 7" or a "monster cock" being 8".
Notes from a size queen: IRL, 7" is the minimum for a good throatfucking (less & they don't actually go down your throat); 8" is a good preferred avg., and 9" & up is a fun challenge. Those golden ticket condoms are made for a reason. And Amazon is great finding others when those don't fit either.
English
I can't believe I am the first to comment!
Waleterio writes excellent erotic stories and we all benefit from his [perverted] talents. Please keep it up, author! You are a cock-spurtingly good porn writer. What more can one say? More, please. Don't despair for the lack of commentary.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Walterio, as you know, I am a long time fan and always on the look out for more great tales from you. This tale was great and reminiscent of your epic “And Mother Makes Four”, offering to keep our mouths watering while waiting for the next chapter (there will be a next chapter or many loyal fans will be pissed!). I loved the open ending with Sally fucking herself furiously as she imagined Jack fucking her with his big cock. Like us, she can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the good work! Best wishes, Pete.
I guess I'm not one to jump on your
band wagon. The story left me cold. He did this, he did that and no emotions or feelings. It was too pat and too tab a goes to slot bish. sorry.
Not your genre
I see from your profile that you have traversed many a story type, this is not your forte, I assure you. Sex is not just about filling holes. It has many more implications and for you to jump on the bandwagon of stereotypes that gays are permiscuous and flakey when it comes to sex is not good for anyone in any community. Stick to what you know next time.
Gays always want their holes filled
Gays are always horny. They don't care who they do it with. Or which hole gets filled by flesh or cucumber or carrot. Just fill the gay hole with something.
This is a great story which can't be torn down by posers. If you think you can write better, have at it.
Right on Target in many ways!
Any gay that has ever come on to me was interested in one thing and that was having one of his holes filled. Your story is right on target regardless of what others say. This is a story about lust not love and the readers should understand that. I am looking forward to the next chapter when Sally gets her wish. I hope Linda finds some love in Europe either male or female in a subsequent chapter. Keep writing this is great stuff. Also don't forget to give us another chapter in the Tennis story!
Fantastic!
Great story. Well done!
Fantasy and Reality Mixed
Not all gays are so promiscus but we all love a big cock and a good fuck. Will I ever be lucky enough to live this story? Doubt it. Would I if I could? Oh yes, take me any way and every way you want.
fucking gr8 story
tats one of my favorite gay story i can say tat this story make me cum 7 TIMES
woow
this is one of the best. I love the way you give the reader an attention-getter like that. wow you kept me hard from beginning to end.
If it sounds familiar, it is.
I started to read this story and realized that it was starting off just like another one I just read. The idea is hot but it's become formulaic -- so I just stopped.
Super wrier
You're one of the best writers of erotic stories at Literotica. Really enjoy whatever the subject.
great sex
reminds me of my younger years
In Lee Jack has everything he needs
Jack has no need for his girlfriend Linda anymore, let alone her mother Sally... Linda's younger brother Lee has everything Jack could possibly want. Why waste that beautiful big cock in Linda's sloppy pussy (or her mother's for that matter) when he can fuck Lee's tight ass as much as he wants?
Meh
This could have been hot but there were too many girls. Also, Jack's an idiot. Why would he need Linda or Sally when he has Lee? This story sucked because of that.
How my brother learned
This is how my older brother got to fuck me the first time. He stayed with his girl friend for awhile but after several months, I was his exclusive fuckee, and still am.
Hot!
had me stroking from start to finish!
Avoid at all cost.
Why not make it 3 feet rather then 9” might believe it then. Ok you might be 9’ or at least 9’ when your dreaming but write realistic. I might be large and I'm not advertising what it is but if I was writing I would go something believe able go 7’ if you must… Be daring and go 3’. Would make a much better read. I know when I am reading this, I am going for scene and plot not imagined facts. If you really want to be 9’ don't say it, just leave it as large, no more expressive and your readers can fit a size 8’, 9’, 11’, or 1’7” it doesn't matter.
I decided to forgive your size issues (maybe they are like people with daddy issues) but sorry it was very disappointing story and I just don't know how to make it worse then disappointing because I would if iI could. I got about 5 pages through, and it was all bad, this doesn't mean you can’t write, but the story was just plain bad boring.
Must say by the description, thought it would be good. And if you or anyone cares my penis was deflating/shrinking rapidly as I read.
Worst story I have read here, and my reading count is in the 1000’s over the last 10 years.
I do read some reviews before reading but often not, but to anyone who is, don't waste your time reading.
Anyone who says my id isn't that old, I use to read anonymously.
Fun
I thought this was s great fun fuck story. I'm definitely going to continue on.
Oh, and I feel really sorry for your sex life if you can't even believe in a 9" cock in an imaginary sex story. It always disappoints me when someone writes about a big cock being 7" or a "monster cock" being 8".
Notes from a size queen: IRL, 7" is the minimum for a good throatfucking (less & they don't actually go down your throat); 8" is a good preferred avg., and 9" & up is a fun challenge. Those golden ticket condoms are made for a reason. And Amazon is great finding others when those don't fit either.
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