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The Werewolf and the Halfling Ch. 06

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/15/08

Just great

Just great! amazing! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks

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by Anonymous01/15/08

I love this story

I am in love with this story..it's fantastic I can't wait for you to write more and finish it..

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by lostchicken08/27/10

Getting there...

Your work is getting easier to read with each chapter. I can tell you are taking the effort to work on your grammar, timing and story flow on effects and it shows :)

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by technowildy04/24/13

your story is weaving all over the place and im finding it difficult to follow but this chapter was easier than the last few, i hope that further on it will be better and easier, without seeming simple.

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